The battle was much more interesting and he took first place. He showed the original protagonist his place.
Will the main character win or will it be a draw again?
Finally, Jareth had a chance to become strong. I am very happy.
'I can become strong too…' (Jareth)
Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
I hope Inder dies and there's Azariah.
But even then, I wasn't sure how long I would remain Inder or when I would become Azariah.
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
Thanks for the three chapters.
It's a cliché, but I don't mind clichés like that.
"Alright now let's break my talent cap,"
Fantasy · WorldEater_11
It was interesting to read. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Good thing the main character won't be apologizing to everyone forever. I've got a rough idea of how the characterization will work. Although it's a shame that it doesn't work all the time but that's my tastes.
"I assure you, I will not do anything foolish again in the future!"
Fantasy · Gryphinne
The characterization of an arrogant aristocrat is just for show? I hate main characters like this. Why make a show where he's changed? Isn't that disgusting to you, author?
"I assure you, I will not do anything foolish again in the future!"
Fantasy · Gryphinne
Finally, he began to show greatness and not just secretly become stronger.
The Crippled Extra
Fantasy · LightOfMoon