Couldn't have said it better myself
"IT WORKS!!! IT FREAKING WORKS!!! This is the best day of my life!" The figure screamed in joy with his voice sounding close to sobbing. "Seventy years of continuous failures but this result is well worth it. Let's see if I'm no longer worthy in the eyes of that old man. Denying me my birthright just cause I lost to my younger brother. With this, I can make an army strong enough to conquer the Darklands."
Fantasy · chaoswalker_7
Sorry but there's no harem
There will be romance with a lot of ups and downs but that'll be a little later in the storyline
The author has done more than just enough. This book is amazing with a gripping story that hooks you in the first few chapters. The only thing to make it better is to update more often
You can use full stops in the middle of a paragraph too. using commas makes it seem like one long sentence
The hairs on her neck stood up and she swallowed hard, with the torchlight of her phone she tried to see what was there, but she was too scared to walk forward, Ana took a deep breath and gathered courage, she walked to the bush where she heard the sound and a creature jumped out of it, she screamed and started making a run for it, she was sweating madly and that's when she realized she had walked too far from home and was lost.
Fantasy · GreekGoddess
Wow Greek, this is a nice start.
Ana was sitting in the balcony of my room, looking at the garden down below, recalling the saddest incidents of the previous year. Never in her 20 years of existence did she feel so pained.
Fantasy · GreekGoddess
The chapter is amazing and the description of battle is even better. I have to keep reading this book
Thanks and I hope to improve even more
Milas hit the beast as hard as he could and leopard let out a cry like a kitten in pain. Milas hit over and over till the beast got off him and leapt a few meters away. The beast gazed at Milas with fury but its legs were trembling. It was trembling with fear and pain. It couldn't believe its prey would be this dangerous.
Fantasy · chaoswalker_7
name is A Vampire's Tale
He just turned, he's not used to it
The liquid itself was unmistakeably blood.
A Vampire's Tale
Fantasy · chaoswalker_7