Carteluo

A frankly normal NTR novel, so far I'm on chapter 39 read, now for a real review and for those interested who do not have brain damage, yes, I'm talking about those who jump off the bridge when it clearly has a sign that says, "you're going to die" but they jump to talk shit about dying, the world is full of retards. Okay, now my real review and critique: The story is strange, we have an MC victim of NTR, but who has a system that brainwashes him or controls his emotions, leaving him as a psychopath without emotions (I think), where his family members are being blackmailed and sexually corrupted, but none of this has any real weight. There is no emotional connection for the characters who are being victims of said blackmail and corruption, the first scenes are presented when they are already being attacked, so all this construction of strong women and blah blah blah… lacks emotional weight, because they are directly classified as filler characters or without narrative weight, in the mind of a reader like me, because they never had a proper moment to get to know them in their social environment and power. The reason why NTR hurts or fascinates *wink*, is because of the emotional connection we have with the character, as an Author you have to get us to at least respect or empathize with the character, before throwing him into the fire. NTR Fanfics work powerfully because we know the characters, so we know, respect, empathize with the characters, which is why NTR works better, because part of the work of these elements is already built. Here the MC doesn't care what happens to these girls, and by extension, we don't either, because we don't really know them, which is why I criticized them above, and also that this element of emotional control is affecting the sense of importance of the situation, since the MC's cold perspective helps to rule out any connection. Everything just feels uncohesive, leaving the scenes as isolated additions for an afternoon without any real commitment to the narrative. Anyway, honestly, more than half of it is already written, I guess I'm late to the party haha. If I have to rate this poison to cleanse my soul of so much vanilla, I would give it a 2 or 3 stars, and from 1 to 10 a 4.5, below average, it just feels rushed and without any real knowledge of what these themes can focus on and excite the consumers of these dark sides of the genre. I also have to give it 5 to balance the balance of the retarded people on the internet, who don't know how to distinguish that they are not the target audience and also that there are people who like the taste of Poison.

This review is only for the niche people of this terrible but fascinating, downfall. I'm afraid to say that the story is too early to judge properly, but as a person who is not afraid of poison and is not a hypocrite who worships MCs who steal girls, but despises the victims, it has the potential to be a good novel of the fall of the brilliant heroine. If you are the kind of person who liked to build sand castles, where your emotional climax was in the destruction and fall of your creations, look no further, here is a decent NTR. I give it a 4 but to balance the scales of the idiots who eat shit and blame their mothers for not taking better care of them when they are underdeveloped adults, I have to give it a 5.

Very promising, for those who are not afraid of the poison of labels. What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger. I give it 4 stars for the moment (up to chapter 4), but since I know there are many with emotional problems who don't know fiction from reality I have to balance the scales at 5.

I'm not a fucking hypocrite, I know where I'm going, and I like to read other people's misfortunes. Those who complain are commoners who identify with the loser. I hope you don't drop it.

It was short but concise, a quick read with the theme of Betrayal, The NTR is somewhat poor in my opinion, one more addition, it is worth reading if you are looking for something regular and quick with this plot.

Good perverted novel, Many say it is NTR but this is more blackmail, the system blackmails her emotionally and her options are adultery, but she refuses from the beginning, but she has no other options, it is to die or survive.

A poor optimistic devil is transmigrated to the body of a low quality Young Master. Sadly his system gives him Points for his cultivation, but it's a double-edged sword, you can justify gaining strength by destroying your heart or let nothing matter to you, because the end justifies the means. Yes, this novel has NTR, but I don't come to be a hypocrite who goes around reading Netori novels, when in essence it's a Netorare in another perspective (The girlfriends of the antagonists is also being NTR isn't it?).