Too many description
Nice Chapter
The story seems good but the narration can be better. The mc is speaking like he knows what is going on inside everyones head. You should use other person's view to showcase their reactions. Use more dialogues.
Nice
please fix the chapters
Lots of mistakes
Raven trait : I like the spotlight Luna: Student council
Ezekiel freed the slave Diana and now fighting
Is the cat sleeping
nice
Transmigrating as an Extra Third-Rate Villain
Fantasy · avbutt