SilentNightStar

well at least your alive thank goodness, glad you been busy with life, hope its the good busy, if you having the block not feeling it, its okay it just happens sometimes, take it a back and write something you enjoy, something new/old just don't lose yourself to not enjoying writing.

is this the beginning of stalker/yandere MC?! we haven't seen his final from yet!

this is great banter between them love this story

haha no problem, i love you're work,i really do like slow building of characters of there personality and power, because if everything is like *snap* power up, power up , level up, its just get old fast, don't get me wrong i love OverPower characters my favorite anime is Overlord haha, but it takes great writing to do it justice from the beginning of a story to be OP, building characters to be power is great story telling, actually see/reading how they grow is fun.your MC is great even though he knows about the anime he's not guessing what other people like Rose or Naaza are going to say or act sure maybe at the first meeting he'll think he knows whats going to happen but when is doesn't he started to treat them more closely, um closely not the word but more like a human, anyway i don't want to say all this without say, don't put to much pressure on yourself if you can't handle it, and i don't mean it harm way, some people work well under pressure and some can't handle it, go at this story at your own pace and inspiration remember to take breaks cuz you don't want to get a writers block, trust me it kills a lot of storys r.i.p, hope for the best in you, just letting you know people like your story don't let the hate comments get to you, all the love to you

i enjoy world building and character interactions very much because i like the story to actually make me feel how hard or how easy somethings goes for the protagonist, its almost like acting, any actor can say 'ouch' but it feels flat, now an actor that moves with the impact and flinchs as if in real pain now thats world building, your odr is very complex character i like that i still don't understand him sometimes and other times he's gives me a suprise on how he acts to others, just keep doing what your doing, i don't know about others but i'm enjoying it very much

nice a long chapter love that to relax on the couch and read, now for your qquestion on smaller chapters, i have no problem except when you focus on character interactions as long as the interactions are detailed as in the long chapter's its good, short chapters are notorious for not giving enough world building and character building they just cut to the "on" "good parts" *me saying sarcastically*, as long as you avoid that, i think short wouldn't be a problem

happy new year remember to cleans your house or body to get rid of negative energy :)