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Good story so far. Just a quick suggestion when you do an authors note please put it in either brackets or parentheses so that way the reads can distinguish between the two and not get confused.
I just read a book that was dumber than this because in 30 chapters that author did not add a single status point to his MC’s strength and just though that speed and dexterity would be simply sufficient
Overall story is okay but really almost thirty chapters and the MC didn’t increase his strength. Does the author think that strength isn’t needed for a bow?
I’ve read this one TAPAS and I am on chapter 202 on there and I can tell you that the story is badass as fuck and it’ll continue to get better
You should introduce The Nameless or Shrii-ka-rai (Eaters of the Force), as they are creatures that preyed on Force-sensitive individuals
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