The story is very good, I'm showing reincarnation as the joker in an interesting way, it didn't show him being evil for no reason so far it was more comical and it was good
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The story is getting very good so it seems like you are taking the joker to one side but leaving it like a cat playing with a mouse just don't make it evil That will be good
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A good story with good potential :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Good story I hope it continues well
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---------------------------_-_-_-_-----------------------------------------++++++++++++++------------------It has an interesting start and I think it has potential.
Jiro
I understand and I just saw many FanFic discrediting the character I only sent my opinion but you are doing very well in the story
I don't think ning rongrong is so bad she's just spoiled but not bad she shows kindness throughout her work and it's not logical for her to be submissive out of nowhere just because she entered a school
I found the 10 Digimon as power interesting