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Not bad! Good start, however, I found the multiple changes in POV kind of confusing at first. It might be best for continuity purposes to stick to one POV for example, 3rd person in order to keep it flowing better, but other than that it was quite enjoyable to read, with strong world-building and character backgrounds.
Hilarious! I was laughing from the first few paragraphs. A great start indeed. I never read a story like this before and I can't wait to see where this goes.
Interesting! The premise of a virus outbreak affecting both ecosystems and advanced technologies creates a compelling setting for a sci-fi novel. The author's creation of the Authonoid to combat the virus is an intriguing plot device. An update to further explore the characters' struggles against the outbreak and political unrest would be highly anticipated by readers.
Thanks for letting me know. Can you tell me which chapter it’s similar to?
The Waiter and the Mobster [BL]
LGBT+ · jmjackie