Kim_C_4514

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Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Replied to Kim_C_4514

Especially YOU KNOW that enel did wrong things in his Past life!!! With this ENDING. HE IS CORRECTING IT ALL.

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Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Posted

Please author notice my request pleaseeeeeeee pleasee please please The marines is actually good. I stopped reading when he BETRAYED the marines. Author shouldve took the advantage and use enel to build the navy's trust so in the end enel can strengthen and lead the navy to be against the world government, and make the navy independent from the world governments commands.of course enel need to plan for this first since he needs funds to be able to support the navy to be independent, but he already have gold or he can treasure hunt for funds etc etc and the next step. since i like that in the story he already befriended akainu, enel should tell this to him since akainu can be convinced because the higher ups in the world government are doing criminal things such as slaves etc etc. and akainu will help enel plan!! And the ending should be all pirates,navies etc will form an alliance to break the world government and rebuild a much better one for the world! you know that this can happen because the character is strong and capable. a more better and interesting story line!!! Only half of the story is good i stopped before chapter 62 Please make a 2nd copy of the fanfic but its different scenerio with what i said. the story line will be 100% more interrsting!!

Kim_C_4514
Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Replied to Kim_C_4514

And the ending should be all pirates,navies etc will form an alliance to break the world government and rebuild a much better one for the world!!

Kim_C_4514
Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Replied to Amelion

The marines is actually good. I stopped reading when he BETRAYED the marines. Author shouldve took the advantage and use enel to build the navy's trust so in the end enel can strengthen and lead the navy to be against the world government and make the navy independent from the world governments commands.

Kim_C_4514
Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Commented

You know this is really well made, but can you make a 2nd copy fanfic of this but a different scenerio? Like enel doesnt betray the marine but befriends and convinces akainu to turn against the world government and lead the navy to be independent from the world governments commands?

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Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Commented

Yooo why did you reveal it awwwww its much better if no one knows hahahahahaha

Kim_C_4514
Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Commented

Bruhh this is funny hahahaha coool

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Kim_C_4514
2 years ago
Posted

CONTINUE THIS BROO PLSS THIS IS THE ONLY FANFIC I LIKED IN YOUR STORIES. PLEASE CONTINUE ITT This is awesome and really the best!!!! Please continueeee Please continueeee Please continueeee Please continueeee