Bro...... Please forgive my wording, English is not my strong point so this book may have multiple grammatical errors......
"This is the Dragon Element Pill, if you eat it, you will be able to break through to the Soul Transformation Realm, which is enough to keep you alive for another life.
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QiDian
Haha, thanks[img=recommend]
Qin Tian grabbed his mother's hand, wrapped one arm around her waist, pulled her into his arms and said with a smile "I just fed you last night, what? The thought of not seeing me for a while makes you feel lost?"
Eastern · Daoistmpp
Thank you very much, I've read all your advice carefully and it's very well put!
Thank you very much, but if I change this sentence, your reply will be deleted (this should be a WN-specific feature) which would be a shame. So I would like to keep my error and let the reader see your suggestion for me, what do you think of this?
A young boy stood in a teleportation formation and waved goodbye to a beautiful woman, handsome and distinguished.
Eastern · Daoistmpp
Thank you very much, but if I change this sentence, your reply will be deleted (this should be a WN-specific feature) which would be a shame. So I would like to keep my error and let the reader see your suggestion for me, what do you think of this?[img=recommend]
Qin Tian grabbed his mother's hand, wrapped one arm around her waist, pulled her into his arms and said with a smile "I just fed you last night, what? The thought of not seeing me for a while makes you feel lost?"
Eastern · Daoistmpp
Oh~
The beautiful woman didn't resist her son's rudeness and squeezed those huge huge breasts against his chest "I'm not going to miss you, I'm going to rest and deal with the affairs of the court in your absence for a few days, I haven't been to court for a long time since you came, I haven't come down from bed all day, if this goes on, those ministers will be advising me by death"
Eastern · Daoistmpp
Ahem, I will amend it as appropriate when you point out all the errors, thank you for the suggestion.
And the beautiful woman was wearing a loose civilian dress, but it was unkempt, the whole dress slipped down and exposed her majestic big tits, her white, snow-like skin shone dazzlingly in the sunlight, the woman was beautiful, like a ripe fruit, delicious and juicy, with willow eyebrows and almond eyes and cherry mouth, a plump breast and thin waist and peach buttocks, what a stunningly beautiful and beautiful woman.
Eastern · Daoistmpp
Thank you for your advice
And the beautiful woman was wearing a loose civilian dress, but it was unkempt, the whole dress slipped down and exposed her majestic big tits, her white, snow-like skin shone dazzlingly in the sunlight, the woman was beautiful, like a ripe fruit, delicious and juicy, with willow eyebrows and almond eyes and cherry mouth, a plump breast and thin waist and peach buttocks, what a stunningly beautiful and beautiful woman.
Eastern · Daoistmpp
If you are a respectable person, you don't want to have a relationship with a poor-tempered, lowly, unattractive woman. You don't even want to have anything to do with them because all they care about is your money.[img=recommend]
The strongest villain system
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