bruhusrs4eva

LV 4

a vagabond surfing the net

2022-09-17 đã tham gia Global
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bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
22 days ago
Replied to idle_enthusiast

Agree wholeheartedly with your review. There was lacking sustenance in the story overall alongside it being too fast paced to understand anything. Mark didn't even get his appearance described in the 30 chapters I read, and the dialogues felt *very* forced and unnatural between him and HSR characters. Back to the pacing again, it really is too bloody fast. I could barely process a scene without the next one already happening mod sentence, and add-on some of the interactions between him and the inne monologues... yeah. Some of the important moments ( esp during the cocolia fight ) gave me second hand embarrasment due to how it was written, alongside the sudden power up that Mark conveniently gained to fight the stellaron within him, and calling it his will... The general impression I have of Mark is a self insert with meta knowledge, not even his appearance was described at all from those 30 chapters I read. It felt like I was reading somebody first try at writing and the author thought on how to make their main character 'cool' by any means necessary. I'll maybe read it up to 50, and see if the quality has increased by then. ( just noticed this review is 3 months old )

bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
2 months ago
Commented

So if all Order members jumped them, they'd Nah, I'd win?

Takamura currently holds the title of the strongest assassin. Nobody has escaped him, including the enhanced superhumans that give individual Order members a run for their money.

Zenin Days

Zenin Days

漫画同人 · JaxWolf4

bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
2 months ago
Commented

Open the curtains, Lights on! Don't miss a moment, of this experiment!

Vol 2. Chapter 14. Open The Doors!

Fate/False Order

Fate/False Order

漫画同人 · Leylin_Blackwood

bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
3 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, this is a devious one... evil herrscher...

bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
3 months ago
Commented

Don't give up, author-san! Even if the plot you're writing now is considered 'boring', there'll always be light at the end of the tunnel!! Never lose motivation when you've reached this far!!!! Thanks for the chapter, and hope you get some boost in the movitation department!

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bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
3 months ago
Commented

400!! New milestone reached!

bruhusrs4eva
bruhusrs4eva
3 months ago
Commented

The strongest Valkyrie of Today Vs The Strongest Valkyrie in History

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