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1 months ago
Replied to TheFanFicReader

... writes the person who responded multiple times with even more words used than me. I just defended the comment i made several months ago. But fine now we can both move on and agree to disagree

"If you ask my sister, she would probably tell you something else. But for me…not really. I just study enough to keep my grades decent, but there is nothing in particular I wanted to do." Parvati answered.

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

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1 months ago
Replied to TheFanFicReader

I did the test 2 times and it was Slytherin and Ravenclaw, so congrats on your deduction. I live in a society where men and women are more or less equal and at the very least, are all expected to have jobs or at the very least do something fulfilling. You may say being a housewife is something that can be fulfilling, but girls usually have ambitions or dreams that go beyond just marrying a rich dude and lazying around the whole day - especially when they're still teens and go to school. Molly would be a stay at home wife in canon and since she has 7 kids, a house that is in need of constant supervision and she has no money to buy a house-elf or to hire a maid she naturally has to spend her time there. Since she's capable of fighting against Bellatrix she must've been a very talented witch growing up so I doubt that she always dreamed of being a housewife 24/7. on the other hand there's Narcissa who could be considered a trophy wife to Lucius. Not much is known about her but she's been described as not having a happy marriage and only really loving her son. Now naturally there could have been a different culture with Indian witches but that doesn't mean that they cannot develop ambitions or dreams of their own.

"If you ask my sister, she would probably tell you something else. But for me…not really. I just study enough to keep my grades decent, but there is nothing in particular I wanted to do." Parvati answered.

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

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1 months ago
Replied to TheFanFicReader

I have a problem with meaningless violence. As far as i can remember, I've also commented on needless decisions by Harry to just show off or kill people needlessly when he should have the experience of an adult and be smart enough to lay low. I despise characters that act illogical or not in character with the established story. I can understand canon Harry not having an idea of what he wants to be because of his upbringing, but i can't understand a pureblood girl like Parvati having 0 ambitions despite being there for all of her life and actually being aware of some jobs.

"If you ask my sister, she would probably tell you something else. But for me…not really. I just study enough to keep my grades decent, but there is nothing in particular I wanted to do." Parvati answered.

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

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1 months ago
Replied to TheFanFicReader

Low in the sense of that's quite misogynistic. As I've commented below, women can be just as powerful as men in the wizarding world. Skill, knowledge and luck aren't gender related. In a society where everyone can literally do magic having a character have 0 ambitious thoughts and openly admitting to it just doesn't paint a good picture - and this characterization is based on her being described as liking gossip and being indian. Even then, the author could have made her having an interest in becoming a journalist or wanting to become a magical fashion designer. But her being an Indian girl that likes to gossip with 0 ambitions paints the picture of her just wanting to be a trophy wife.

"If you ask my sister, she would probably tell you something else. But for me…not really. I just study enough to keep my grades decent, but there is nothing in particular I wanted to do." Parvati answered.

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

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1 months ago
Commented

Huh? That sentence makes no sense!

"Don't bother trying to escape. No one has broken out of my jutsu before and you guys won't be the first."

Naruto: Harem No Jutsu

Naruto: Harem No Jutsu

Anime & Comics · ChakraLord

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3 months ago
Commented

but he couldn't use his chakra in that domain ... or did that goddess help him?

[How is that so surprising? With how old I am, absolute chakra control is hardly a difficult concept for me. You saw how I can wield natural chakra like my bitch, my own chakra should be a piece of cake.]

Nindō: Dominion

Nindō: Dominion

Anime & Comics · Addyctive7

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3 months ago
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She didn't care about how Naruto sexually took advantage of her during the session. Not even that he literally fucked her face in the middle of healing her. That, she did willingly and almost excitedly, but what truly mattered to her was whether or not she was able to get rid of the scars that were all over her body.

Nindō: Dominion

Nindō: Dominion

Anime & Comics · Addyctive7

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3 months ago
Commented

Simple: just genderbent Jair and add the blood related OC as the MC

Also, I was thinking of giving Jair an OC body instead of Dae Ho's. (For some reason just looking at Dae Ho kind of pisses me off and makes want to punch the air.) But! Doing that would require more groundwork.

Keep it in the Family (Secret Class)

Keep it in the Family (Secret Class)

Anime & Comics · Nneeil

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3 months ago
Commented

The Yandere was a real turn off the way you've written her imo. Nothing against dom/sub play but scarring is a step to far imo.

Is there anything in this story that you didn't like and want removed, or that you did like and want to see more of? 

Keep it in the Family (Secret Class)

Keep it in the Family (Secret Class)

Anime & Comics · Nneeil

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4 months ago
Replied to Robin_Boot

Dude - even in Naruto, there are fast acting and deadly kinds of poison. Sakura was prepared against Sasori because Chiho is Sasoris grandma & teacher, and they created an antidote beforehand, and Sasori played with his prey (because of Chiho). He could have easily killed Kankuro beforehand, but due to arrogance and nostalgia, he didn't - which led to Sakura developing an antidote beforehand. Sasori knows almost every poison available, and he could easily create one specialized in killing someone with a Sage body (so could Orochimaru, Tsunade and Kabuto). And finally, a Sage-body doesn't make you immune against poison - it might make you more resistant against a few but not against every kind. And there are all sorts of different acting poison available. Fast acting, painless, tasteless, paralizing, etc. There's a reason why Sasori was feared as much as he was, but he also had a vast spy network with sleeper agents everywhere. I bet before he died, he already infiltrated every village with sleeper agents in high positions. He alone could have prevented Natsuos rise to power by simply activating one at the order of Tobi, who is notoriously paranoid and would have eliminated a potential threat like another surviving Uchiha.

"Is that so?" Kabuto nodded. He didn't think Natsuo had any reason to deceive him. After all, this man could easily kill him if he wanted to.

Revival of Uchiha, Starting with a Harem

Revival of Uchiha, Starting with a Harem

Anime & Comics · TitoVillar