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Also just read the latest authors note, heres hoping you get through Covid easily and don’t have the “bad” case, when I had it the worst part was not being able to taste anything, it did make me sleep 17-18 hours a day for about 2 weeks though lol, my bad for choosing a crappy time to rant, wishing you a quick recovery

Ah, I must’ve missed the part where she resolved herself, because all I saw was constant mention of her feeling guilty, not anything else taking accountability for her mistake. As for Vahn, I’m pretty sure he didn’t talk to her about it, she just noticed that he didn’t like it, 2 very different things. I just feel like this situation required an actual conversation, and not brushed over like you did. As for the Akeno thing, it’s good to hear that the other girls won’t repeat Rias’s mistake, I did skim through the rest of the chapters and enjoyed the development with the other girls, so I will probably stick it out until something like this happens again, hopefully I don’t regret my decision. The situation itself is kind of understandable, just the lack of conversation about it didn’t sit right with me, felt like it should’ve been made clear that such stuff shouldn’t happen when you are in a relationship, ya know? Either way, my bad for the name calling, I was in angry mode due to lack of sleep.

Unless that particular situation is anime only, and if that’s the case then I will properly admit my ignorance. Its the one where Akeno sucks the magic out of Isseis dragonized hand through his fingers if you aren’t sure what im talking about, no way that should happen in this fanfic when she is in a relationship with Vahn, it’s too intimate.

You are an idiot. Do you not remember the thing Akeno had to do for Issei after he sacrifices his arm? Inform yourself before making yourself look stupid

It is guaranteed to happen again once/if Issei sacrifices a body part to DDraig, Akeno will suck the magic power out just like in the anime and you will say “she was only doing it to help him, it’s not ntr I swear” it’s what you do lol. Also, once again you completely ignore the main part of a comment and only focus on what you can defend, the main part was the issue of you always leaving these situations open and unresolved, clearly an opportunity for growth on both Vahns and Rias characters, but no. You make Rias make light of the situation and Vahn too ignorant to open up about how it made him feel, and write it all off with Rias offering her body to make Vahn feel secure about their relationship. It’s laughable how you always talk about development, but refuse to actually let your characters grow.

She literally just opened her legs for the MC and he forgot all about her and Issei, are you intentionally being dumb?

Yep, just keep avoiding the issue, real smart. Genuinely do not understand why you make your MCs lack even a tiny bit of self respect lol, the naruto guy was the only decent one, but even he allowed one of his girls to plow the others. Bro is tolerating the Rias thing just because she did it to save Issei, a person completely irrelevant to him and his life, so hilarious. Congrats on making me hate fanfic Rias even more, you WN authors are something else!! If the situation was cleanly handled, it would’ve went over way more smoothly with your audience, instead you leave it unresolved and bound to happen again, congrats you are not smart enough to think these things through or you are intentionally dragging on the ntr bait too satisfy the freaks, nicely done if so. (I know, I know. It’s not ntr since she didnt do anything, that’s why it’s called bait, just like animes that show the fl in a pic with a random dude, but it turns out it was a family member) Tl;dr: Stop leaving these situations unresolved, you do it in EVERY fanfic you have wrote, it’s tiring to read.

That’s it? No talk about her sleeping with another dude all night while being naked and Vahn sitting around worrying for her? She just opens her legs her and he goes stupid? This will set a precedent for Akeno to do the same thing when/if his dragon powers overflow. I actually can guarantee that more situations like this will happen. Conversations should’ve been had, boundaries should’ve been set (if not by Vahn then Rias, she clearly knows that you shouldn’t get naked for another dude while being in a relationship, the reasons don’t matter because it doesn’t change that fact), the situation was handled poorly and the result is that it will happen again, I would bet on it.