1olip0p

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2022-08-13 đã tham gia Global
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1olip0p
1olip0p
9 months ago
Posted

Brother, it's hard to understand the story because you keep changing from first person to third person in the middle of a sentence

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1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Commented

Listen, I don't want to sound like a hater, but serious, you had to go with the mc unconscious trope that he will lose, I don't hate the fanfic, I really love it google translate

1olip0p
1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Commented

Question According to what I read, you say that Owen Knight is a few years older than the MC, so how is it going to be in the story while the main cast is in high school and the MC is going to be in middle school? (google translate)

1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Posted

The story was good until the mc became a pedophile .......................................................................................................

1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Commented

+1

1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Posted

I liked the story but because it's so slow it will take at least 800 chapters to reach the time skip and that's not my cup of tea

1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Posted

I'm sorry, I really want to read this story, but it's hard for me to read a story with a MC who hides his powers -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1olip0p
1olip0p
1 years ago
Commented

You could maybe stop putting spaces at the beginning of every sentence it seems out of order. Sorry, it's hard to understand me, English is not my language [google translate]