BibAsXettri

BibAsXettri

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BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
9 months ago
Commented

You are using way to much future tense in the story where you should use present tenseshe 'would' come with tea and biscuits (it's sound *ucking stupid like you are seeing the future) why not write she entered the room while holding the tray of tea

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BibAsXettri
11 months ago
Replied to Reader_Rillas

if u want you can contact me in discord - bibasxettri 🙃

BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Commented

IF U SEE NEXUS INSTEAD OF PENDRAGON IN ANY CHAPTER THEN SORRY I REWROTE THE WHOLE STORY BUT I FORGOT TO CHANGE THE WORD IN SOME PLACES

BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Replied to JetLord004

do same to mine

Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.

Build A Family Of Gods

Build A Family Of Gods

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BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Posted

This book is amazing, it has very good world background and good story. I recommend this book you should read it..

BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Replied to

Alr

Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.

Build A Family Of Gods

Build A Family Of Gods

Fantasy · BibAsXettri

BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Replied to JetLord004

It dosesn't matter who does it first tell me what to write?

Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.

Build A Family Of Gods

Build A Family Of Gods

Fantasy · BibAsXettri

BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Replied to JetLord004

Sure 👍

Rennes held the letter from his mother, Evelyn, in his trembling hand. It had been years since he left home to serve in the Phantom Army, and the news he was about to read would change the course of his life forever. His father and older brother had been attacked and killed by a monstrous creature while inspecting their land. The weight of his family's legacy now rested solely on his shoulders.

Build A Family Of Gods

Build A Family Of Gods

Fantasy · BibAsXettri

BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Commented

First chapter is nice, hope you don't drop it and u should make the chapter a bit long.(Please upload frequently 😀😀).

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BibAsXettri
BibAsXettri
1 years ago
Replied to SocialHippo

Will mc become op?, if he will become then in how many chapter??

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    Build A Family Of Gods

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM OVERPOWERED

    4.5

    The Story is about an Medieval Fantasy World where our Mc got Transmigrated and Become an Family Head of a Small Noble Family in an Small Kingdom with an System with which he get Rewarded for giving Birth to Child with better potential. As he uses his System to develop his Family and gets Stronger and Stronger. From an Baron to an Duke of a Small Kingdom an Then a Duke of a Small Kingdom to a Duke of the Great Empire and From a Duke of a Great Empire to a God of the Word. MC have a Laidback, Carefree and Cautious Personality. He will not risk his Family or Himself for Small Benefit, He Doesn't want to become a King or Emperor because he don't want to work all the time and spend his time with his Children and Wives. English is my third language so there may be some grammatical mistake so hope you don't mind :)

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