You are missing a d in goddess
"Of course. My name is Alledonora. I am the chief goddess of gratitude. I hope you enjoy your new life, Elizabeth." She smiled at me.'I will fully fake advantage of this new life, my Godess.'
Anime & Comics · Merezinea
Get is wrong, it should be got.
Seeing her clueless state, Ayase couldn't stand it anymore. She walked over, tapped Chu Lian's head, and said, "Didn't you just complete a side task and get 3,000 Culture Points? Why not use them to exchange for something useful? You're so dumb..."
Anime & Comics · Dao_Of_Heaven
Capable of
Raiko:" that good now my turn Death Lightning of Existence" she slash her katana infusion with death and lightning cable to destroy existence of someone.
Anime & Comics · Thanh_Tran_0715
Taining? It should be training
"Taining is mandatory" Black Canary replied, causing him to scowl deeply. Taking her arm off his shoulder, he turned back to her with a scowl, before a large holographic screen appeared, with Batman in it.
Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_
I like where the story going and thank you for writing
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The starts should have a is or was before the like
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Anime & Comics · Thanh_Tran_0715
Side? Do you mean size?
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Anime & Comics · Thanh_Tran_0715
And remove the “to” since it becomes redundant
Raiko:" that good now my turn Death Lightning of Existence" she slash her katana infusion with death and lightning cable to destroy existence of someone.
Anime & Comics · Thanh_Tran_0715
Cable should be capable
Raiko:" that good now my turn Death Lightning of Existence" she slash her katana infusion with death and lightning cable to destroy existence of someone.
Anime & Comics · Thanh_Tran_0715
And instead of fake it should be take
"Of course. My name is Alledonora. I am the chief goddess of gratitude. I hope you enjoy your new life, Elizabeth." She smiled at me.'I will fully fake advantage of this new life, my Godess.'
Danmachi - The Queen of Destruction
Anime & Comics · Merezinea