MortalAsura

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2022-08-06 đã tham gia Global
Huy hiệu 16

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MortalAsura
MortalAsura
5 days ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
7 days ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
8 days ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
9 days ago
Commented

I wonder if the other realms and worlds will hear about Micheal forbidden power and come to this world? I am also curious what Rose, Ellen, Marina, Nero, and Ashlyn are up to and if they will hear about this? 🤔

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
9 days ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
3 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
3 months ago
Replied to MortalAsura

I had the chance to speak with him several times on Discord. It's truly heartbreaking to think that he'll never get to complete his masterpiece.

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
4 months ago
Replied to Jackson_0005

yes

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
6 months ago
Replied to Harpreet_Ubhi

I've read up to the recent chapters, and I've noticed that the grammar improves significantly around chapter 1000. Although it's a long journey, I've been listening to it instead of reading, which helped me push through. Over time, I've become accustomed to reading novels with poor grammar, so I've developed the ability to fill in the blanks effectively.

MortalAsura
MortalAsura
9 months ago
Posted

The novel is truly captivating. Although initially hindered by numerous spelling and grammatical errors, I persisted and discovered a hidden gem. The story's development is exceptional, complemented by a unique power system. Michael's overpowered character is executed masterfully, yet there are moments of frustration when his friends surpass him despite his accomplishments. The narrative is rich with humor, poignant moments, and a touch of sublime romance. However, the sheer size of the story occasionally leaves gaps, possibly due to the author's solo efforts without a team to assist in filling those narrative voids. In essence, the novel is a splendid tale. Despite occasional lapses due to its expansive nature and the author's solitary efforts, the overall narrative remains a fantastic journey.