i acknowledge this paragraph is a little redundant
His mimicry ability had created a unique copy of the Phoenix Force, one that was independent of the actual entity. Unlike Jean, who was bound to the consciousness of the Phoenix, his version was an empty vessel of power, free from the cosmic entity's influence. It was his alone to command and control.
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A massive explosion erupted behind Laura, spreading dust in all directions. From Zora's vantage point, it appeared as though a giant handprint had been pressed into the desert floor, the military convoy now reduced to powder.
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comments and suggestions are appreciated, they motivate me!
def will be rewriting this chapter
Xavier, always the first to speak, began with a warm smile. "Welcome, Zora. We are the X-Men. I am Professor Charles Xavier, and these are my students," he said, gesturing to the group behind him. "I apologize for the intrusion before, it wasn't my intention to invade your privacy.
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reading this chapter back its so lackluster, this is a definite fix
Seven seconds later, when he reappeared, he was already above Badlands National Park, 1600 miles from New York.
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not college
It was a teenage boy, definitely no older than fifteen, with long, curly black hair that currently lay in a mess due to friction during sleep.
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i used it to edit and improve, i smelt it too but thought it sounded more professional. ill be making changes
Xavier's face grew serious as he absorbed the information. "Very well. Let's respect his wishes and meet him there. Remember, we approach this with diplomacy." He paused, looking at each member of his team, his expression a mix of determination and concern. "We must show him that we mean no harm and that we are here to help, not to threaten."
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it would actually be more accurate to say mc traveled at 1082 times the speed of sound
"1600 miles in 7 seconds. That's 1000 times the speed of sound... and I felt like that wasn't even my maximum."
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looking forward to the next chapter, great job so far author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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