SHDW_Replayz

Love those so far! Keep it up. The pacing does seem fast but it's not to a point that I can't understand what's going on so it's okay.

Please no I find his character so annoying l, him and rock Lee

Jesus idiots like this guy make me want to stab my eye out. I feel like torturing people like this.

This was too sad and the first time a written story made me 😭

The quests are just things he would be doing anyway. All it does is put it in the form of a quest while giving him a reward for it. The penalties are also not really from system.

This chapter made me feel like the mc is weak minded and controlled by their emotions and I really don't like stories like that so I'm dropping this.

I hope he find the tomb soon and I also hope the mc isn't some goody two shoes that saves everyone they see.

Also some kind of really strong jewelry accessory on his ear/ears. Maybe it grants him strong resistance towards his weakness which I believe is light magic or holy magic.

Very good story so far and a suggestion I have is an ability to get stronger as his subordinates do like having them marked in the soul or something where if they gain power he also gains that or gains a part of what they gain.