Rsna29

Rsna29

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Rsna29
Rsna29
Rsna29
1 years ago
Commented

You merely adapted to it I was born in it.

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"That's strange… I was born with the sickness," Kieran suddenly said.

Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player

Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player

Games · ApexPen

Rsna29
Rsna29
1 years ago
Commented

Isn't Endurance important for Berserker?

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Replied to StrangeJelly

Chill. Everyone has different perspectives. As long as nothing personal it doesn't matter to argue or discuss. It will help author to understand more and for readers help to find new perspectives.

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Replied to StrangeJelly

He already lived a life, he has seen more and know more yet for every simple thing he using skill makes it really weak and pathetic. I'm not expecting of Mc or saying anything against being weak. It's just how he behave like that. It's like how drug edicts needs constant drugs to even maintain a bit of sanity.

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Replied to Kara_wish_writes

Noted. 😊👌

She was currently sniffing one of the roses trying to capture its fragrance in her mind. Suddenly a man also came into image he had night sky dark hair and pale skin. His face was not visible due to him standing behind the young woman.

The Curse Of Azure

The Curse Of Azure

Fantasy · Kara_wish_writes

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Commented

Interesting start but it's hard to feel the character's emotions. Maybe because haven't known the character yet. It might change once get to know.

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Commented

*into the

She was currently sniffing one of the roses trying to capture its fragrance in her mind. Suddenly a man also came into image he had night sky dark hair and pale skin. His face was not visible due to him standing behind the young woman.

The Curse Of Azure

The Curse Of Azure

Fantasy · Kara_wish_writes

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Commented

*she

She waved her hand while touching the surface of the water slightly and murmured some sort of a spell. As he did that the reflection in the water changed and now it showed a young woman, she looked that she had just reached adulthood. The girl in reflection also had platinum blonde hair in fact she was almost like the copy of women gazing in the reflection except that she had Dark blue eyes and no mole beside her lips.

The Curse Of Azure

The Curse Of Azure

Fantasy · Kara_wish_writes

Rsna29
Rsna29
2 years ago
Commented

Don't make it where the Mc must always help protagonist or someone who others can take advantage of like the system just now asking Mc to do something in return for some power upgrade. A Mc who does what benefits him and his people are the best rather than a Mc who playing nice.

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