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Wait, what do these buffs do?

The 11 people were picked based on innate talent so luck didn't affect who got picked as it was not random

I feel like the main characters in these novels lose their humanity way too easily and quickly… he has only been in this world for 10 days and that isn’t enough time for him to completely adapt to a new set of values

Also, people with better genes are stronger at the same level. E.g a B-gene level 3 should win against a D-gene level 3

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Bro, this writing is peak my man

This is dot 15

Although an earlier awakening could be good, I think a slower start building up more basic powers was a good start and if he awakens earlier, powers like swordsmanship are more likely to be forgotten in the future. I still think that there should be a period of training and fighting where he is unawakened and less op

would this not be a little boring, that would mean that he would have no threats if he could hide from any enemy, maybe a growth stealth skill would be better that gets stronger and unlocks new functions as he gets stronger(plus works against stronger enemies) would be more balenced

yes and if you add powers being unlocked as different elemental powers are fed to the heart, it means that the power of the heart could be more versatile and change more as he advances or unlocks elements and powers

But is he villainous just for the sake of it, or is he a calculating and manipulative MC who will act only for his own benefit, because i think that the latter is better

Not necessarily, in fact most of the time, the heroes are more dumb than the villains... I think an MC who is selfish and just prioritises himself in the long term is the smartest

An intelligent AI attached to the system could be nice but i think one that is more robotic and less emotional, only with servitude, would be best

Maybe add counters as well, as in if the enemy is powerful enough, they could stop the teleportation or track them

I think this could be nice but a cost for using may be needed to nerf it

and let time pass tin storage otherwise it is way too convenient , but you could have a slower passing time instead