Yeah editing and rewriting if I dont have a clue how I can write it better.
Yeah I often let it correct mistakes I make. Its faster that way
Thats good to hear, thanks for your feedback! ^.^ ~Cheers
Yes he got memories. But they are only for songs or maybe other stuff i dont know yet. I dont want him to cheat through his life. Maybe I can edit a little so that its better to understand. Btw thanks for pointing it out
Sorry about that, I forgot that. I also wrote a couple of times that they scrolled through their phone because its the basics know instead of newspaper etc. I will edit that point
Okay thx for the ideas. Let me cook and try to rewrite the stuff
And of course thank you for your opinion <3
I know what you mean BUT it cant be a 1:1 Story. Nero changed the Life of Charlie and others. There is a Hook Up in Chap 14 and there will be more later. Rose will be introduced to Alan and Jake in Chapter 18 witch will show how "annoyed" Charlie is from her. I will rewrite the first chapters after the story is etablished and I will try to better include those traits. Lets think about the Story as a "What if" Story.
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original Lord of the Forest - A Witcher Fanfic
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Broken Notes - A Two and a Half Men Fanfic
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Icebound Legends
In a world shaped by destiny, Kaden, bears the Wyrd Compass, a mysterious relic that can summon powerful allies from across dimensions—but only when fate aligns. Bound by the ice-cold power, Kaden struggles to control his unstable abilities while leading a crew of legends. Guided by a compass that responds to the heart's desires, Kaden must face a treacherous journey, where the line between good and bad is frozen in time. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- * The represented characters and stories belong to their respective creators. I only own the OC18 Chs 56 sưu tầm
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