ASMR_Sculptor

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ASMR_Sculptor
ASMR_Sculptor
2 years ago
Posted

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ASMR_Sculptor
ASMR_Sculptor
2 years ago
Commented

Making him forget about the Quintuplets? That doesn't make sense even with how much time has passed. He isn't a goldfish. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy most of the story, but consistency and believability go a long way in writing a good story.

ASMR_Sculptor
ASMR_Sculptor
2 years ago
Commented

I still don't get why he didn't use the bean on Kaori yet? If he was really worried about her health, wouldn't he find a way to feed it to her as soon as possible? Yet, here he is procrasting on a literal matter of life and death for somebody he cares about. It doesn't make any sense.

ASMR_Sculptor
ASMR_Sculptor
2 years ago
Commented

Honestly, as a long time SW player, getting artamiel would make me more excited than getting an extra waifu.

ASMR_Sculptor
ASMR_Sculptor
2 years ago
Posted

Good stuff. Really good grammar. A bit slower but fun and interesting. Looking forward to more chapters and future lemons. ______________________________________