Spaz_Dragon

Spaz_Dragon

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Spaz_Dragon
8 months ago
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Lacks world building but it still had a start but the premise of the story is interesting from what the author said in the first chapter and it has a lot of potential with a good first main character but he kind of grew into power fast but the pacing can be fixed. Overall the book is good but has potential to become great

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Spaz_Dragon
2 years ago
Replied to Golden_Silence

I'll fix that in the future. Thank you

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Spaz_Dragon
2 years ago
Replied to Aakash_khare

how far did you read coz I'll agree about the first 2 chapters but just read more you see it improves

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Spaz_Dragon
2 years ago
Replied to WispInABottle

Please read in deeper I fix that mistake

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Spaz_Dragon
2 years ago
Replied to CulturedDragon

thanks for the positive feedback and I'll be sure not to disappoint

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Spaz_Dragon
2 years ago
Replied to funmaxwell

I understand. Thank you and I'll show more detail