This author really knows how to invest you in a story. It's been a comfy read so far, and it's easily reccomendable.
Her finger was so soft and felt sublime against my hard penis, and as I opened my eyes I watched as she scooped off a small pearl of precum and brought it to her lips, tasting my seed and giving me a small smile before sauntering out of the bath.
Laid Back Life On My Demi Human Ranch!
Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
I don't have any complaints, I just wanted to say that i've truly enjoyed your story so far, and thanks for writing it and making it available. it's an easy recommendation for me to make.
I enjoy the novel. If I had to voice a complaint for 40 characters' sake, it would be that chinese names are different variations of dropping spoons down the stairs, and on occasion, I mix them up.. as does the author. :) on a serious note, you've done great writing this story so far, and I wish you luck on your continued writing because I'll be coming along. :P
really..? excellent. i've noticed a particular lack of.. racism from the main character. how can he be chinese without being racist?
But unexpectedly, Zhao Tian's cooking is better than hers. Seeing her reaction, Zhao Tian smiled wryly. Because of his special physique, he can learn anything if he tries it.
I alone am the Honoured One!
Eastern · Akkuzz_69
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Mei Xiu retracted the mobile from her ear and glanced at the dinner table filled with delicious foods that she had prepared with her own hands for Zhao Tian. Her eyes trembled as a wave of sadness filled her heart and she bit her lips I frustration.
I alone am the Honoured One!
Eastern · Akkuzz_69
A contemplative sigh left Zhao Suyin's lips and the blish on her face deepened "D-Do you need help from me son?" she asked placing her hand on his crotch.
I alone am the Honoured One!
Eastern · Akkuzz_69
While the grammar at times can be a little hard to sift through, its a story that I have absolutely loved following so far, and you've done more then enough to earn another reader for the rest of your time writing this story, I sincerely hope that it gets to the conclusion because you've done an excellent job.
i'll be honest, as ignorant as it sounds, I tend to avoid books with chinese names. I just get lost when I take any time away from them and come back. However, the resources in your discord that easily reminded me of who was who and your excellent writing style won me over. I'm a huge fan, and I really appreciate your story and the effort you put into it. I easily recommend this story for any fans of r-18 content. i'll be happy to come along for the rest of your time writing this story.
Dual Cultivation God Returns
Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion