DemonicGodJAMN

DemonicGodJAMN

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Just a chaotic being trying his hand at writing.

2022-03-05 đã tham gia United States
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DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
5 months ago
Commented

Where you hidin crawlah boi

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DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Commented

Sir, it has been 2 months since your last release! Where ya at???

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DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Replied to Uncle_jeffs_tales

I protec the author at all costs

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Now don't get me wrong. Although I did vote in favor of him not winning the prize, there were ten other editors besides me.

I Will Kill The Author

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Replied to GoddessKarma

Kek

DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Posted

Alright first things first, this novel has a decent story to start off with, even though the story starts off very mellow. The novel has decent writing quality but still has some grammar and punctuation issues that can easily be fixed. The characters don't seem forced into the story like how many novels will try to do, and the world background is explained slowly much to my liking. The story hasn't been updated in a few days as of writing this but the author seems to have a consistent upload schedule otherwise. Overall, a great read!

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DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Commented

AM is unnecessary here

DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Posted

The author does a really good job with this novel. The introduction to the main character is phenomenal and keeps the reader on their toes. The plot is diverse and easy to understand, the characters feel like they’re actual humans in each senario, the writing quality and attention to detail is superb and keeps the readers intrigued when delving into the more lore filled areas of the novel. Overall, this book is definitely worth reading, even if you’re new to the genre!

DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Commented

Thats a bold way to start 👀

DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Posted

Let's take this from the top, the story of this novel is decently thought out. It follows it's trope well and keeps the clichés to a minimum. However, the writing quality isn't the best. The author uses "And" , "Then" , "So" particularly too much, alongside the mc's name. Although the writing quality can be improved upon greatly, the story is still quite readable and I definitely recommend it to avid fantasy enjoyers.

DemonicGodJAMN
DemonicGodJAMN
1 years ago
Commented

Oi where you at?

Now don't get me wrong. Although I did vote in favor of him not winning the prize, there were ten other editors besides me.

I Will Kill The Author

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619