There is no doubt about the quality of this story, and i definitely think its good, but I just cant say i enjoy it, i don't mean that its boring or anything, but the whole time i just feel this sad depressing aura looming over the story, maybe its because i don't like some of the decisions made, or maybe the characters don't feel quite right to me, or the main character feels of in how strong he is or how preachy, or how he interacts with other characters, something about it just feels off to me in a way i cant put into words, I'm not saying this isn't a good story or that i don't enjoy some of the creative ideas the author has put into it, but while i read it, i don't find myself enjoying reading it, i feel off after i stop, maybe that's intended, maybe its supposed to make me feel things, to make me thinks. Well that's just my opinion, i still think this is a good novel, i just wanted to rant a little
I would honestly want to know too, this fic has just skyrocketed my standards for good fanfics
Yugito's attack sent him half a kilometer away from them! Behind his mask, blood trickled down his lips. Despite being injured, a smile was plastered on his face. He broke out into laughter and muttered, "What crazy bastards!"
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
I freaking love this opening, omg I did not expect to find something like this
at the start of the chapter you used the word vilige a lot and it made the writing a little clunky
Sách này đã bị xóa
thanks for the chapter
The one closest to him had no chance of dodging. His neck was sent flying in the air. Worse, the sword also sent a flying slash towards the rest of them. Three more Taki ninjas couldn't dodge or use any defensive jutsus and died to the slash. Only the Taki captain and the two Iwa Anbu were able to move out of the way.
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
you know, everyone else so far is more likable than fujin
Tamotsu nodded as he thought, 'Yeah. If Fujin is distracted, then his life would be at risk if we take a difficult mission.'
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
he just unlocks a mongekyo from this
However, Mieko crushed every bit of his pride when she replied, "Why? Aren't you the same age as him?"
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
that made me smile for some reason
The next day, all 3 submitted their application to participate in the Chunin exams. The first exam will be a return test, which will be conducted a week later. Renjiro gave the entire week off to the genins. The genins hence did their own training, while meeting every afternoon, for brainstorming more ideas regarding combination jutsus and teamwork.
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
well honestly that's one of the stranger things that's been said to me on this website
"Isamu Midoriya, you will eat that broccoli right now or you won't get dessert." She warns with a small, subtle menacing smile, watching me intently like an eagle... Red flag, she said my full name and threatened to take away my dessert! She is evil!
My Chaos Academia: Brotherhood (MHA/BNHA)
Anime & Comics · Empe_ror99