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2022-02-08 đã tham gia Indonesia
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Pros: + Updates consistency Cons: - Good premise but poor execution, the interactions between characters were too stiff. You can check the Siscon fanfic, that story has the best interactions between characters. - Monologue, too much monologues! - Almost every monologue paragraph always ends up with ANNOYING 'right? right? right?' - Akikan didn't know much about the original story of One Piece. Like the MC (without Hakis) managed to subdue Moria easily. The MC killed Blueno without taking his DF because Akikan didn't know how OP door-door devil fruit was or he didn't even know that Blueno was a DF user.

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