The story is very well written and has a very interesting development without losing its rhythm, the truth is that it does not generate so many expectations but it ended up surprising me for the better, the only bad thing is that in very few parts it feels written or manipulated by I.A or maybe the author simply writes that way although there are few dialogues that I have noticed that exaggerate or dramatize some minimal things so it does not make it a bad read, my most sincere support to the author please continue with this story
At first I saw a lot of potential in this story but I was disappointed by the quality of the writing and several things are exaggerated to a level that becomes annoying, seeming to be written or manipulated by an A.I.
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2. No, keep it as a single pairing with just Hatsume.
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