Zeinex

Zeinex

male LV 4

Im lazy and so far I enjoy writing

2022-02-07 đã tham gia United States
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Zeinex
Zeinex
1 years ago
Posted

Definelty my favorite story so far on this plat form. It’s just my opinion and I think this story deserves it so far.

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to Lucas_Coimbra

No worries I’m just trying to make it a worth while read I have no plans to give up on it.

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to Sageofculture

I like the idea, but I’ve already given him his wings I could try to work it into a different plot point maybe, but that would be spoilers thanks for reading.

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Posted

Heres the reveiw I’ve enjoyed it so far thank you.

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to cheeki_breeki

True, but I don’t see the qunari killing a potential weapon over him being disrespectful, also that’s just going to be how he speaks, for now, it will change a little over time from experience but he’s young right now, and unless he respects them he won't talk to them with respect. Thanks for reading and any tips are appreciated as I’m trying to get better.

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to SupremeChaosDragon

Thanks I’ll try it out next chapter

Tell me if you don't want the brackets around the thinking or self monologue I can just write it without

Dragon age: Merlins Journey

Dragon age: Merlins Journey

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Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to Left_Nut_Of_Madara

Thank you for your review and I appreciate your advice.

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Commented

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Just imagine him with gold irises and thats what he looks like

Dragon age: Merlins Journey

Dragon age: Merlins Journey

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Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to Shuilan

I was tryinging to make it to where it comes to him naturally, but now that I think into it deeply your right and i’ll try my best to improve on it,there might be a rewrite for the story once I improve this was just supposed to be my first try at writing thank you for your feedback

Zeinex
Zeinex
2 years ago
Replied to Shuilan

I see where your coming from, I’ll try my best to improve on it thank you for the reveiw and tips.

  • Getting a rewrite kinda original

    Getting a rewrite kinda

    Video Games ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG SLICEOFLIFE WIZARDS ELVES

    A 10 old child confined to a hospital room for all most of his life dies when his illness takes him from the world,he loved to read fantasy stories with swords and magic, oh how he especially loves the hero’s he would dream about exploring his own fantasy world. Until he was reincarnated into a new story his own story This is my first attempt at writing a story. so if by some grace of god I get good enough at writing a story I’ll probably try to re write this I don’t know how often I write maybe once a week or two also any suggestions/advice would be appreciated also this will probably suck just letting ya know I don’t own dragon age, only my oc I guess Also this will be an AU as a I have a final enemy worked out already I just don’t know if this is in the direction they’ll take the games or series I also dont own the cover Not a harem If someone else already did this then i dont know i havent read any dragon age fanfic that goes in the direction mines gonna go The free rein over mana power wont make him overpowered instantly or anything like that he won’t even have the willpower to use it all this power does is work like life in vains rudeas im saying his because its the only iteration of that anime or manga I’ve read or watched but basically with his willpower he can use mana to create or control his own creations and others with free will so he’s only limited by his imagination and willpower

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