I don't normally read romance, but this one is really good! The author is very capable of describing the scenes thoroughly and is very, very good with grammar. Color me impressed, this one is a must-read!
Maya marveled at the way Ava's presence illuminated her own existence. The spark between them was undeniable, an electric current that charged the air whenever they were together. It was as if their invisible hearts had finally found each other, creating a gravitational force that drew them closer.
· MartinsEmmanuel
I like the term 'Urban Jungle' it's a nice touch
Little did Maya know that this meeting with Ava would mark the beginning of a journey—a journey that would navigate the complexities of love, identity, and the power of two invisible hearts intertwined in the urban jungle.
· MartinsEmmanuel
Already extremely impressed with your ability to explain things, wow
With focused determination, Maya entered a bustling café nestled amidst the chaos of the city. The aroma of freshly brewed coffee enveloped her senses as she stood in line, waiting her turn. The place hummed with activity—people engaged in conversations, others tapping away on laptops, and baristas skillfully crafting intricate latte art.
· MartinsEmmanuel
A really nice opening, I don't see this very often
Alright everybody, welcome to one of the best stories on Webnovel. This novel is amazing, the way that the author perfectly constructs a world he doesn't over-explain, creating Alex, a 12-year-old boy who is a REALISTIC child, one with fears and one with talents, it's all perfectly constructed. I'm sure you're reading these reviews to find out if this is the right novel for you. Trust me, if you're looking for quality, you found it. I have five books in my collections, and this is now one of them. Excellent job.
This may not be a popular opinion, but the way you introduce places and leave them open to interpretation is really nice, leaves a lot to imagine for the reader.
After taking a moment to admire the unique architecture, Alex climbed back into the carriage. Excitement bubbled within him as he eagerly anticipated the adventures that awaited him in Lotardale.
Fantasy · DubiousTone
Alex is the fire one, right? With his knowledge of Sparks and everything?
Olana's eyes gleamed as she explained, "The four heroes appeared from the four corners of the continent, each possessing control over one of the four elements: Fire, Water, Air, and Earth. While the exact details are unknown, according to the sacred texts of the Church, these heroes united humanity and, with the aid of mages and soldiers, built the walls and forts that now protect us from the teras."
Fantasy · DubiousTone
We will watch your growth with joy!
Alex hurriedly responded, "No, it's nothing like that. I just feel like I'm not as strong or smart as the others. I don't know anything besides writing, reading, and casting sparks..."
Fantasy · DubiousTone
I'm on it!
Survival Evolved: Incarnation
Fantasy · Twitchy_