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7 minutes ago
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Change it then author - you can edit - why are you authors so lazy???

"Now is when the wolf follows the lamb... no, that sounds weird. Good thing there's no one around to hear me," Pakura thought as she blinked while following Karin in her elemental form.

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

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12 minutes ago
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The grammar and paragraphs need some editing.

"I think that would be less efficient," I shook my head. "It's better if one master teaches one student full-time rather than having to divide their attention among three. They can practice teamwork later. Kakashi's Team Seven is a good example of this. Naruto barely improved under his tutelage, despite knowing his identity, and Sakura made no real progress because most of her focus was on training Sasuke. If Kakashi took it a bit more seriously, Naruto could have shed some bad habits, and Sakura could have improved significantly with the right motivation, but he ignored her most of the time due to her civilian background. Besides, teachers need to be able to teach something useful to their students to avoid repeating the case of Team Eight. It's obvious to anyone with two brain cells that Kurenai isn't suitable to teach Hinata, Kiba, or Shino. The only reason she got these clan heirs was because of her relationship with the Third Hokage's son, Asuma. I'm not saying she's not a capable kunoichi; it's just that Asuma doesn't hesitate to use his influence to her advantage. But since her specialty is genjutsu and no one on her team ever used anything like that in the entire series, it would have been more useful to assign a tracking specialist jonin as the teacher and give Kurenai a squad with talents for illusions."

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras

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19 minutes ago
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*his former village

"An apple?" Terumi looked puzzled at the fruit in her hand and remembered the symbol on Enel's headband, assuming it made sense that apples were the specialty of her former village if they had gone so far as to use it as their representative symbol.

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras

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2 hours ago
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Thanks for the chapter - hope for more chapters with all the sexy women In Martial peak .