I am reading this as my reference as I aspire to be recognize by pancakeswitch-sama in Scribblehub
Chapter 1: The Protagonist’s Sister
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
Chris and Paul!?
The grammar is shaky, but as a writer myself, I know this will improve moving forward, the reviews are good so I will give it a chance
He was a simple guy so...why of all the novels he read he had to end in the one that just knowing too much would either directly kill you or there were gonna be a paranoid knocking at his door before he could even react.
Book&Literature · TheWitnes
Personally, I would make this the cliffhanger of chapter one, so as to avoid repititions
"You are so helpful, sir," a voice, dripping with dry sarcasm, responded. "Coming from the one pointing a gun at my head."
Book&Literature · Tsukivel
I am drinking coffee, and now I'm screaming because I spat it in my legs
And then there was... AssLover97... Wait! No! I changed that after hitting a few hundred followers. It became DarkPriestess. Ah, the emo phase—truly a dark age.
Book&Literature · Tsukivel
Slap Yagura in the face and Mei in the ass and then escape, take note of this, author
I came from scribblehub, this app has better reading interface, anyway, I recommend toning down the poeticness of the paragraphs, you can keep the chapter count just make the paragraphs less... you know, if you entered the phase of the story that has a lot of fight scenes, it will be bad for the story for you to abruptly turn it into brick-and-mortar descriptions. This novel has a lot of potential, so I hope it will improve
Wixx's mind flooded with all ubiquitous information.
Anime & Comics · Zoaqx
I know this might be a little late, but I got an idea, how about her not being able to properly shape the ice release without a pre-water supply, basically you'll give her a giant water canteen in her genin days
"The cold," Jun'ko whispered from the bleachers, hugging herself, "isn't just coming from her chakra. It's as if the air itself is responding to her presence."
Fantasy · ItoKun
I hope I do, so that I can escape from my mom during this grading season in our college
Have you ever experienced that jarring sensation when you suddenly opened your eyes, only to realize you had no idea who you were, where you came from, and more importantly? Where the HELL ARE YOU?
Fantasy · Midnight_Paradox
1 million views in volume 1 must be a lot of dopamine huh, continue the good work, sensei
With gratitude and a kunai always ready,Ito-Kun ^.^
Naruto: The Mist Within
Fantasy · ItoKun