Val_Blue

LV 4

Baguio FWB

2021-12-28 đã tham gia Global
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Val_Blue
Val_Blue
7 months ago
Posted

i got bored in chapter 1. it has one of the messiest introduction I've read. intros should be introduction not some kind of info dump that makes the readers confused . making the words more fancy doesn't really fascinate me(idk about you guys) instead for me it just makes it more untidy because you don't deliver the point of the story, and it's just chapter 1 but the words used makes it more confusing because the story just started. I can't make a picture of what you're trying to deliver in this chapter. anyway that's my honest review . toodles ✌️

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
9 months ago
Commented

in the previous wave before nerfing his talent, shouldn't he already have reached like 5million mark easily? the monsters are all gold level with 5300-5400 attributes per monster. if i remembered correctly the prev wave have 900 gold monsters

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Replied to Pyrozian

exactly 😆😆😆

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

the plus 50 comes from the skill he got from the uncle. the 5 points in agi per level maybe not included because he got it late... is this correct ?

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

how can you ban someone if it's not a game...

"Teacher! I'm reporting! Mo Xiao is cheating!!! Ban his account quickly!!"

After Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me Invincible

After Becoming a Solo Player, My Unlimited Skills Made Me Invincible

Urban · Traversing Nine Realms

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

what happened. I'm in the middle of this chapter then suddenly the content changed. author what is happening ... even the next chapters are duplicates of the previous chapters. I'm stuck in this chapter waiting to be fixed. if you can't make new contents for chapters don't release duplicated ones . it's very disappointing when reading then suddenly cut off. please fix all the duplicated chapters

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

this happens often now ... please fix the chapter error

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

i think it has potential .. but reading the first chapter with different kind of scenarios and infodump is not a good start(maybe just me ) i got bored in the first chapter already. I'll give it a chance tho, rating is high so I'll read till chapter 10 or 20. I'll just leave this novel if it's not to my liking 😊 (Honest review)

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

foreshadowing when the clones eat pills with obvious effects and lethal side effects. 😂

For example, there were pills that had both obvious effects and powerful side effects,

I Have Countless Clones

I Have Countless Clones

Eastern · Lemon Slices

Val_Blue
Val_Blue
1 years ago
Commented

his luck title is in effect it seems

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<Green Slime Core was dropped by Green Slime>

The Top Player is a Real Cultivator

The Top Player is a Real Cultivator

Games · MyLittleBrother