kzidane_wp

male LV 13

lazy guy

2021-12-18 đã tham gia Indonesia
Huy hiệu 7

Moments 14
kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
4 months ago
Commented

is it just me or i cant really stomach this kind of novel with first person view? i cant get immersive as much as when reading third person view. the story is interesting, but because it's first person view, i cant get the feeling this novel are entertaining, in fact many time i feel cringe reading it.

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

what kind of battle did i see? is this can be considered a novel? it more like a logbook at this point

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

classic, trying to be lay low, and someone destroy the plan.

Why did she have to disrupt my carefully laid plans?

Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

Transmigrated as a Fat villain: All heroines are after me

Fantasy · A4KL

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

seeing this <nulli> make me lost the reading expirience [img=Speechless]

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

what a messy chapter

Sách này đã bị xóa
kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

hmmm.... i found this novel kinda similiar to i will kill the author.... or is just me?

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
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why i feel it like i have seen this scene? is there any novel that have with this similiar scene? if i not mistaken.

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

there are many wrong grammar.....

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

did you use a translate corection? i find quite many wrong word, like using she to refer cale who is male.

kzidane_wp
kzidane_wp
1 years ago
Commented

there are repeated paragraph......