Silver_K_Savage

what happened to camilla?

what happened to camilla?

i think you are not focusing on the acting. his thoughts while acting, his immersion experience, his improvisation and the things he did better than the original etc made this novel interesting in the first place. now, there are only one or two instances and then a whole film is done. his experiences in the workshop and how he did it in the real world was the core of the novel. now, lucas does something, the audience are amazed, they become nostalgic, the become emotional and cry and that's it and it is said again and again for both movies and songs................... it is becoming more like a diary entry, i id a song, then i went for voice acting, i mastered it, i revised a script and all loved it and they hadn't seen as good a writer as me and then i started acting in the movie and i did it so good, the audiences were mesmerized and they felt they were inside the movie, my father blocked me in my written movie, but i got support from others and the media knew my father hates me still now and so on. my girlfriend left love for success, wrote a sad song, became more famous, an old acquaintance supported me and we fell in love, destroyed weinstein etc. .......... i request the author to read the beginning arcs of the novel himself when lucas was in the first two three projects and then the latest ones.......................it was my understanding, lucas wasn't a good actor, he just practices a lot in the real scenario in the mental workshop, the request is to make his acting projects a little more detailed, at least 5 to 7 chapters on his acting and improving his performance by improvisation, getting into the character fully etc but not just makeup, the verdict of excellent performance , i wish to see you describing the performance no the reaction of audience while he is performing, it can be said at last once or twice in a single film.

Almost everything was good byt the taking in students for dojo? I don't know.. Best of luck

Mc should at least have a personality. Don't like spears. Halberd or sword or saber. Dual handed. Nice novel. Thank you for the chapter

Someone just interrupted and said some harsh words and he is shaken? I hope he doesn't go around announcing his power level and dual affinity . I also hope it doesn't follow the usual, having crush on the frost lady. It is used too much, make it a little different style . anyway these are my opinions and wishes. Good writing till now

Mc does not want to take money but asks for everything else. He saves everyone when he can and is present there, but he calls himself no hero. Please author, keep the important traits of mcs personality consistent

suddenly asking whether there us a relic to increase talent, without even knowing if they exist? are you making him dumb? and still I feel like killing that student was useless and do not fit in the storyline. he face no massive bullying from that guy or anything. suddenly this thought comes in his mind and he kills, man this is pointless. too many logical loopholes. he is not even researching his power, he could learn more about gravity to understand his power more more. but nothing. now you tell there are ways to upgrade talent fir others too. please have a restriction on it, like it can only be raised once and by only one level. otherwise no need for system. you do know right, gravity can affect space and time right? now he is unnecessary too cold . actually I like mc being cold and ruthless, but not a villain. he could have atleast checked upon tyler.

has he joined any club yet?