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ch 15 Chapter 15 Preparations for First Battle

Demonic Madness

Demonic Madness

Fantasy · Ace_dia

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She never even knew him in the first place... she pretty much just saved a few human villages on a whim lol

As the attendant hurried away, Erik allowed himself a brief moment of introspection. The image of the flaming angel, Ursula, lingered in his mind. Her abandonment had been a catalyst for his transformation and his resolve. He had to know: would she recognize him now, after all he had become?

The Guardian gods

The Guardian gods

Fantasy · Emmanuel_Onyechesi

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In the original novel, he mocked protagonists bad habit of thinking out loud during this part, now it seems like he's picked up that bad habit himself. MC was perfect the way he was

"Alan Lockwood..." Ian muttered to himself as he remembered Alan's sudden outburst in the classroom, his way of addressing the teacher, and his words after he got up.

I Stole The System!

I Stole The System!

Fantasy · Dragon_7454

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Which realm is he in? Or are all three realms part of every galaxy? Are the realms even physical places? So far this reminds me of breath of creation but way more confusing and way harder to read... I might be reaching my limit

The galaxy resembled a celestial masterpiece, its swirling arms and radiant core drawing Hiroshi in with their mesmerizing beauty. It was the closest-looking galaxy to the Milky Way, a beacon of light and possibility in the vast expanse of space.

Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within

Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within

Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass

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This is the third time you've explained the afterlife system this chapter, I feel the need to read it though because you could have changed something again... REALLY hope this improves in future chapters, like author said

In the Heavenly Realm, Paradise and the Death Temple represented two paths for souls to embark upon. Paradise offered eternal light and bliss for those who had lived virtuous lives, while the Death Temple provided a place of reflection and guidance for those seeking solace in the afterlife. Both paths offered opportunities for spiritual enlightenment and growth, reflecting Hiroshi's belief in the inherent goodness of all beings and their capacity for redemption.

Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within

Echoes of Creation: The Universe Within

Fantasy · VegetaIsBadass

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