RafaelMitz

RafaelMitz

male LV 3

just another person who wants to reincarnate in a fantasy world =D

2021-11-30 đã tham gia Brazil
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RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
1 years ago
Posted

I found the concept of the story interesting, all these things about tests, trials, etc., are really cool. The potential of the work is not bad. The biggest negative point of this story is the protagonist. The mc doesn't look anything like the strongest assassin in the past life, the mc doesn't have good control over his emotions (he should have since he's an assassin), the protagonist is very silly sometimes... What happened in the second trial between Aiden and Mia was ridiculous. Something typical of a silly Japanese isekai with fanservice where the girl likes the mc for random reasons, where they both fall to the floor and the mc's hands squeeze her melons by accident... bro, she asks for a kiss as a reward after all that ? and then sex? The protagonist acts very differently from what is expected of an assassin. sigh... I couldn't read after that. I found it very childish. If you are someone full of hormones who likes to do you know what, then you will have no problem with this.

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
1 years ago
Commented

yeah bro. because you know the feeling of having your memories manipulated haha

As he looked around himself, he was in some shabby room that seemed to be like some sort of wooden cabin.

Life Stealing System: I Became Immortal After Reincarnating!

Life Stealing System: I Became Immortal After Reincarnating!

Fantasy · JALLEN

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapters!

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
2 years ago
Commented

WOW, that was amazing! This magic reminded me of "Avatar: The Last Airbender". It was even better because of the lightning.

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RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
2 years ago
Commented

"Elemental Chamber". I don't know what it is but I already know that this poor boy will suffer heavy humiliation. 🧙‍♂️

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
2 years ago
Commented

Since he messed up a "fair match", I think the mc will be punished. They probably also think Jared will lose. I doubt it.

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
2 years ago
Commented

Obviously the "impartial" jurors will prolong this... thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
2 years ago
Commented

Will He still end up losing because of arrogance? That way of thinking... Typical of a cheap villain. thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitz
2 years ago
Commented

Richard is that kind of cheap arrogant villain of the stories... Obviously, I hope to see him being humiliated at some point in the story hehehe I believe he will win, but it will not be as easy as he thought. thx for the chapter 🧙‍♂️