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Thanks for the chapter. I know I commented this on the last chapter but I’m going to say it again, please don’t make the same mistakes as A Magical Journey. No love triangle, no vault that alters personality, and no edgy crime fighting at the end. Just choose a love interest and stick with it. Whether it’s Daphne or the potter twin I personally don’t mind (even though daphne makes more sense.)

I can see the influence of A Magical Journey in this story, but please for the love of god don’t do the whole love triangle thing with hope and daphne. There are three things in A Magical Journey that stop me from reading it again, the love triangle, the sin vault and the edgy-ness at the end. Please avoid these and the story could honestly be better than A Magical Journey.

Imagine the plot twist of him being dead and is wondering around as a ghost without realising and that’s why the students are scared of him and he can see through the cloak. I know it’s not the case but imagine how unique that would be.

Personally, I was hoping for a Daphne pairing mainly because I have a soft spot for the character. But I can see how a hermione pairing would work.

How come you said there 30+ chapters on Patreon but there’s only a few on there when I checked? Is mine bugged or is it a future plan?

It’ll probably make more sense for it to happen next year, an extra year to mature, gives her the summer to digest the whole chamber situation and you could maybe tie the lack of action by dumbledore and the teachers from that year into whatever you have planned for her 3rd year so it triggers the start of her own views. Honestly, I’m just looking forward to being able to binge read this once it’s finished. There’s not many HP fics that are easy to read through a second time. ‘A magical journey’ was good on the first read, but after that the vaults were a drag to read through and I never liked the whole personality changes on a couple of years. This fix though so far has been a joy to read and will be on re-reads.

The only thing I can think of is some sort of event that encourages her to think more freely, at that age a lot of her views are most likely to be from what she’s been told from her parents. For example she most likely thinks that a person shouldn’t be killed no matter what they’ve done (light side/dumbledoor views) but the MC doesn’t think like that. So if you can, try and think of some event or trigger that makes her question the world and how it works in more depth, then at that point she could go to the MC to get his take on things. Just an idea

Definitely gonna be here till the end, it’s a great story so far. Just to make sure, Harry’s sister is the eventual love interest right? Getting major vibes for that and I’m completely okay with it. I really like her character so far.

Thanks for the chapter. Do you have any idea how long your story will be?

I have a few questions, how many chapters does the original have, is the original complete and if not what year is the original up to?

CHEESE FOR THE CHEESE GOD!!!

CHEESE FOR THE CHEESE GOD!!!

welcome back you sexy thing, CHEESE FOR THE CHEESE GOD!!!

So if his first year at hogwarts is 1988 that means he is 11 at that time, and if the years are the same as the movies then the first avengers event (battle of New York) will be in 2012 which means at the end of mcu phase 1 he will be 35. Endgame takes place in 2023 which will make him 46 by that point, if I’m wrong about any of this then contact my lawyer

Please for the love of cheese, we need more. More mama McGonagall, more thought out plans and a sprinkling of papa black. I do hope he has a good relationship with Sirius, the boy already has Mcgonagall now he needs a good father figure. Could also be more motivation to get stronger, the more he gains the more he has to lose. In summary, MORE PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF CHEESE