Elliot_Jackson

Elliot_Jackson

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I’m going on Hiatus for a couple of months…

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Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Posted

It was fine up until he turned into the usual phycopath oc mc’s that I find on this site in the dc arc. Honestly at least show some guilt, even if it was self defense,such a change is hard to go through without development, not magically deciding to be a killer for the greator good.

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Replied to Guaca

Also he was an anime fan so that stays with him.

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Replied to Guaca

I fixed it thanks.

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Replied to Guaca

Thanks for the review

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Replied to Dylan_Berneman

What is most popular in Norse, Make the comparison.

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Replied to IDLE_Khaos

This is going to be a start, I plan to make it develop into the Asgard we all know and love today, so have a bit of patience, I will explain everything.

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Posted

The only problem is that the story seems kind of bland… like maybe it’s just how the story is written.

Elliot_Jackson
Elliot_Jackson
1 years ago
Replied to Dunkmasterjohn

I’l explain more about this world in the next chapter

Elliot_Jackson