So what happened to my privilege chapters? 2 days aleady and no updates
So far so good. Writing quality is good as always :). The update stability 😭, I mean. Yeah it slow, maybe like 4 chapters a week. The story development is still on progress, starting slow. Character design is also still in progress. World background is still in progress. Though I must say, I am quite sad that you have taken a break from your other novel. Keep it up tho:)
I quite like this chapter. More dialogue
Overall it’s a pretty good novel, especially when you started writing 1 week ago. Although it’ not the best, it good potential. Wiritng mistakes is close to 0 Slow start but it starts picking up at chapter like 14 I think. Personally I think if you develop a good cultivation system with names and allat later in the novels it would be pretty good.
Bruh this was a good fight. The scenes made me thrilled man. Good job, a little slow on update tho.
Eat it once more, didn’t You complain for chaptersssss by not having enough speed and power?
author instead of complaining all the time which is so annoying.. complaining about how slow he is. Why not focus on speed, he wants to get faster but doesn’t Focus on it. Author making him run around with a shield when hes lacking speed is VERY SMART yes
Li yi fei will he try to get her?
"Just remember one thing," I continued. "No matter how much other people harass and insult me, you cannot interfere. Do you understand?" This was for her protection. I don't want her to become a target as well. Even if she was in one of the 4 Great Families of Shenzhen, the Qing family was still weak compared to the other 3 families. Scum like Li Yi Fei won't be afraid of offending the Qing family.
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