Daoist96s1k6

Daoist96s1k6

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Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
2 hours ago
Replied to DaoistmvWChj

-I see you already have completely clear ideas, I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Daoist96s1k6
2 hours ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. -I was thinking that you could have him find programs for the focus that are useful while he explores the ruins from other focuses or PCs, like an analysis program where he could analyze the videos he makes, a program to create workouts from the analysis and what he wants to learn, training courses on everything like programming etc... -The focus could also have a zoom and the ability to record things with the zoom, that way he could record things from afar or even just use the zoom to observe. -But why do you write frist instead of first?

Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
2 hours ago
Replied to DaoistmvWChj

-I hadn't thought of that, since I was more focused on explaining how Chisato Hasegawa is related to him and not Basara... -But it's still an extremely strong power that can erase everything so it seems like a bit of a loss for him not to get it himself and have to rely on the sword.

Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
3 hours ago
Replied to Joao_Matias_5451

I know technology is always important but you could play around with the Focus breaking or some kind of jammer in the story.

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Daoist96s1k6
3 hours ago
Commented

-I'm starting to read now, but why Yamato? -It would have made more sense to me that he wanted to be half Noblesse with all of Cadis' powers without the side effects -For the other half a Sparda-descended demon like Dante or Vergil who get stronger and stronger with fights until they become practically invincible. -He could want a Soul Weapon Devil Arms with the ability to grow with him and become any type of weapon/weapons he wants instead of just Yamato and Vergil's Swordmanship which he can easily obtain over time and then thanks to being half Sparda-descended demon he could extremely quickly gain that level of skill with all types of weapons and fighting styles both armed and unarmed, looking at how quickly Vergil and Dante adapt to the tired Devil Arms they have.

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Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
4 hours ago
Replied to DaoistmvWChj

-The last one and I should stop with the ideas... -I was thinking about Chisato Hasegawa and I had an idea that you will surely have already decided on, even if it is not clear to me how to explain this thing, you could say that Kenichi is Basara's half-brother and Jin's son and, only that Basara could be a pure hero conceived just after the fight with Fafnir with another hero who died during the war before its end, while Kenichi could thanks to the immense energies unleashed by their battle by Jin, Sapphire, Raphaeline and Kenichi's father where Raphaeline could end up pregnant thanks to a use of her divine power to heal everyone. -In this way you could explain how Kenichi obtained all these races, bloodlines and powers, in addition to having access to the bloodline of both Jin should take that of the heroes and the dragon Fafnir and that of his father who could be a half Yokai with dragon blood if you want, would be born in heaven in place of Basara.

Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
5 hours ago
Replied to DaoistmvWChj

-It occurred to me that you could do that after his parents' death he was taken by the hero clan and trained in the village for his immense potential but after the accident that could be caused by Basara or him or both although I don't know which is better, in this way it could explain his relationship where they have feelings for him with Celis, Yuki and Kurumi as well as the members of the hero clan. -Sorry if I keep writing you ideas but they come to mind both while I read the answers and while I watch the anime of Shinmai Maou no Testament.

Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
5 hours ago
Replied to DaoistmvWChj

-However, he could take Basara's place and Basara could act as his ally and support. -Also because I think he is already a protagonist, so I wouldn't see anything strange if the will of the world made him become the protagonist of all the stories.

Daoist96s1k6
Daoist96s1k6
6 hours ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. -Have you thought about what I wrote about not making it dependent on technology?