Nice chapter
Sad that you stopped writing the other novel. Though this one looks promising. Keep up :)
Wait fr?
"I want too much, so I'm even crazier. Junior Brother, let's travel together in this life!"
Outside Of Time
Eastern · Er Gen
They will probably get exposed in the test for the sword sect thingy
The evil ghost immediately nodded and memorized these two names. As long as the other party appeared in the range of its perception in the future, it would be able to sense them immediately.
Outside Of Time
Eastern · Er Gen
Not the captain. Anyone else is completely fine but not the captain
"I want too much, so I'm even crazier. Junior Brother, let's travel together in this life!"
Outside Of Time
Eastern · Er Gen
It has been like this since chapter 1
She is going to be here for the next eight months and will try her hardest to achieve the breakthrough into the Grandmaster Class.
Monster Integration
Fantasy · AnWan
So slow upload time
Author is writing for his father surgery or something like that, I’ve read it Bedford somewhere. So I don’t think it’s gonna end soon. Things that we miss: -Who Ashlyn really is. -Backstory of Ashlyn. -The higher worlds -Titans -Somewhere in the novel it said that tyrants is just mid level strength in the higher worlds, so it’s a lot of ranks left. - Even those top from higher worlds is just a weakling to titans.
I think it’s a lot left. Even the higher worlds are just small things for titans
Writing Quality is good, just add more monologues then it would be perfect. Update Stability has improved, compared to your last novel :). Story development until chapter 10 could be a little slower. Example write more about the trial, personally I think it was a bit fast but that’s just me. Character design is good. World background so far so good. The depth realm is well explained. He also has some unique powers which I have never seen before. But don’t make them too Op, because then it will get boring. I see you put some restrictions on his abilities which is good. I’m looking forward for future chapters:)
Mystic Fisher of the Lost Waters
Fantasy · ExpiredRice