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Jaed21
Jaed21
1 days ago
Replied to Lex_TheKing

I believe that at that point the war would be so intense and the MC so strong that it wouldn't quite matter whose child the Irregular rising up is. And in a situation when Bam does not die during the Crown Game, the MC could still eventually 'usurp his fate' and end Jahad by simply being far stronger than him and then requesting the Thryssas and Thorns from him around the time the Hell Train arc ends (because Bam didn't want that fate in the first place and the MC is more capable and stronger even without those) or killing Bam to get the Thorns and Thryssas and get rid of a potential threat.

Jaed21
Jaed21
1 days ago
Replied to Devilsmercy026

Urek-like route wouldn't be that difficult to pull off because FUG would simply struggle to force the MC to join them due to his connection to Yuri and because 2 Irregulars disappearing (especially when Isaac is so strong) would be way too suspicious, making them a target of the Jahad Empire's and Wolkhaisong's immediate investigation. In addition, Yu Han Sung/Hwa Ryun/Luslec's faction already has Bam as the chosen one that they would pour their all into (Thorns) and wouldn't want others in FUG to know about another Irregular. In this kind of situation, mutual cooperation while the OC is a hidden Irregular who seems would support Bam seems best, since otherwise the OC could totally ruin them while they can't eliminate him. So I look at it from this angle. Isaac could officially become a member of Wolkhaisong and secretly cooperate with FUG for benefits, even request a Ranker's soul from them or whatnot.

Jaed21
Jaed21
1 days ago
Replied to Devilsmercy026

Maybe, maybe not. I am considering the development. Ultimately, Bam is useless in this story, but perhaps it would be good to still have him and show how useless he would be... I also think that it makes more sense for MC's soul devouring ability to be a default he can use from the start because his power is different from Bam's, so he doesn't need to discover it in the Rice Pot (my original plan). If that happened, the MC would be quite overpowered. If the MC is too overpowered, him being the only MC would make the events not very interesting. Instead, he could be a beast from Wolkhaisong, the strongest Regular and a free man, overturning the events at his leisure like Urek.

Jaed21
Jaed21
1 days ago
Replied to Lex_TheKing

It happens the only way it could happen

Jaed21
Jaed21
3 days ago
Replied to Grammy

Is it really? We know that Ro is a good guy, a lightning user and a Fisherman too.

Lero Ro smiled at him and said, "In that case, why not temporarily participate in the Light Bearer class that I'm in charge of?"

Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

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Jaed21
Jaed21
3 days ago
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Reply to one of the comments that ended up being removed. I am also satisfied with the current story because it's simple and the OC simply replaces Bam in what's to come. But for the general population, I can imagine that they would want to see Bam around, regardless of how boring and unless he would be in a fanfic. The problem with this development is that it's confusing and difficult to say whom FUG would want to give the Thorn, the child of the prophecy that returned (Bam) or the Irregular with V. But I guess, after a Floor Guardian confirms it, someone like Luslec would want to trust his Lord V and might even think it's a part of V's plan. I could imagine there being some kind of test to decided which one of them is the child of the prophecy, but I have absolutely no idea what kind of test it could be... As for Rachel dying to trim the drama, I wouldn't want her to die any time early in the story. Even without Bam chasing after her, she's the driving force for most of the plot. At least, she'd have to steal Emily, gather Yura with Hockney's picture and a bunch of fodder for the MC to crush, and awaken Hoaqin/White on the Hell Train. With a soul eater ability, the MC would especially have a lot of interest in getting to know (eating) White.

///Commentary:I noticed that the popularity of the story dropped massively after Bam died, and I also feel that the story lost a bit of soul because of it. I don't regret it because what happened was too boring and dissapointing on that route as the OC carries Bam and has to deal with his boring drama, but perhaps things could be improved. It isn't impossible to instead have Isaac absorb V, and Bam recover soon after thanks to quickly regenerating (the explanation is that his death trigger a protective spell left behind by Arlene/Outside God, but before that, Isaac's grail/skill already got V).

Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

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Jaed21
Jaed21
3 days ago
Replied to JFalcon

I removed those paragraphs to not bait/confuse readers for the time being. The problem with this development is that it's confusing and difficult to say whom FUG would want to give the Thorn, the child of the prophecy that returned (Bam) or the Irregular with V. But I guess, after a Floor Guardian confirms it, that someone like Luslec would want to trust his Lord V and might think it's a part of V's plan. I could imagine there being some kind of test to decided which one of them is the child of the prophecy, but I have absolutely no idea what kind of test it could be. As for Rachel dying to trim the drama, I wouldn't want her to die any time early in the story. Even without Bam chasing after her, she's the driving force for most of the plot. At least, she'd have to steal Emily, gather Yura with Hockney's picture and a bunch of fodder for the MC to crush, and awaken Hoaqin/White on the Hell Train. With a soul eater ability, the MC would especially have a lot of interest in getting to know (eating) White.

Jaed21
Jaed21
4 days ago
Replied to Bosu_san

Rudeus had no grasp on the scale of his mana reserves for most of the story and is quite stupid, just doing what others do, for once. If we want an explanation for what author did. Laura wouldn't have as large mana reserves as him, so it would always be useful to have a staff to save mana. Even for Rudeus, it wouldn't be completely useless

Jaed21
Jaed21
4 days ago
Replied to ParagonDaoOfBS

What's the problem with it? Bam did it too, and lost. He just has to win

Isaac was grateful for the advice, but still looked straight at Anak and said, "Sure. I'll take this bet."

Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

Anime & Comics · Jaed21

Jaed21
Jaed21
4 days ago
Replied to Jaed21

This way, no rewrite. Just Bam revived off-screen. Similar result.

  • Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic) original

    Fate/Tower of God - Climbing the Tower as/with Mordred (fanfic)

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI GENIUS ANTIHERO HIGHIQ UNPRINCIPLED

    4.87 Mới cập nhật

    A self-taught Magus and an avid fantasy reader ends up inside the Tower of God with Mordred's power and with Mordred's soul inside his Ignition Weapon as a result of his wish to the Holy Grail. ... Summary: The Main Character participated in a Holy Grail War and ended up being the final winner thanks to wit and luck, but at the cost of his Servant Mordred. As a result of his wish to the Holy Grail, he gained various powers similar to those of his Servant, his dead Servant Mordred was restored and took refuge inside his sword, and the two ended up inside the world of the Tower of God. Over time, the MC discovers that the Tower is exactly a place where he can fulfill his various desires and wishes as promised, growing more powerful and achieving more than just a single wish could grant him. ... It is mainly a Tower of God story. The only aspect from Fate verse is the MC and his abilities. The goal for the Main Character, initially, is to grow his powers and live an interesting life in the new world. PS: Bam plays a small role in this story, even though he's initially introduced. PS2: Mordred is not a romantic interest. This is not her character. She is MC's platonic female friend and partner/Ignition Weapon for the majority of the story, since the base of her character design is a child seeking attention. The other girls from TOG are the heroines, and mainly Endorsi. Hwa Ryun also gets a lot of attention, but because of the nature of her relationship with the MC, she keeps her distance.

    23 Chs 2.1k sưu tầm

  • Reincarnated in Mushoku Tensei: Realistically Overpowered (fanfic) original

    Reincarnated in Mushoku Tensei: Realistically Overpowered (fanfic)

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE REINCARNATION MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM OVERPOWERED ISEKAI ANTIHERO HIGHIQ UNPRINCIPLED

    4.75

    A reader reincarnates in the world of Mushoku Tensei as Seraphim Greyrat, the first son of Paul and Zenith born instead of Rudeus. Using his meta knowledge to the fullest, he aims to become the strongest existence of that world, using both sword and magic. ... Warning: A SLOW PACE FANF-FIC WITH A LARGE FOCUS ON MAGIC STUDY AND WITH A HIGH LEVEL OF DETAIL. STARTS OFF SIMILAR TO CANON. Seraphim studies the magic system of the world and Battle Aura techniques in depth to understand them fully and gain the best possible advantages. He becomes overpowered without external cheats, a result of his hard work and brains. Note: How this fanfiction is different from others in that many Mushoku Tensei fanfics seem to often get the magic system of the world wrong. The abilities that the Protagonists develop often go against the magic system of the world, are illogical and ridiculous, and something like this in my opinion completely breaks immersion. For example, ridiculous new magic spells and OP sword moves that get invented by an infant MC despite the fact that they are completely devoid of logic and are just impossible without cheats. Here, my Protagonist faces various obstacles and problems during training, that he should, while also gaining insights and does what is realistically possible to take his training and fighting methods to another level. He also achieves things that seem nearly impossible or fantastical, but with good logic and reason behind them. -It is a harem story, but I aim for meaningful romance and deep relationships. It is a harem story. However, harem is not the major focus of the story at all. It only means that the MC will have more than one partner EVENTUALLY. -Because the Protagonist accomplishes A LOT during his early years, there might be no real romance or even harem content anyway for something like 100 chapters. There will be no child sex here as well. There might be some romancing and teasing, but just that, nothing sexual. How this story is different from the original is that it is not about an MC searching for a cure for his ED, being passive and pathetic pervert all throughout the story while screwing around and doing nothing most of the time, but is a man on a mission. Seraphim starts from a similar point as Rudeus, but his actions cause a slowly spreading butterfly effect as he's focused on the most optimal path and BENEFITS. In contrast to Rudeus's perversion, the MC can sometimes instead be amoral and do evil pragmatic things for the sake of his ambitions and loved ones, so people with fragile hearts be warned. He is not as disgusting, but it doesn't mean he's a goody-two-shoe white knight. ... SUMMARY: -MC is born instead of Rudeus with just his meta knowledge and high talent. Taking more after Zenith, he has blonde hair and blue eyes. He trains his mana from an extremely young age, masters Battle Aura and chantless healing magic | A genius of magic and the sword, a determined true main character pursuing supremacy and eternal life. -The story will have a deep dive into the magic system and how the MC interprets it (how I interpret what we know using logic). It might be boring for some people, but it can be very interesting for others (would be for me). -The story starts with the same layout, and has slowly spread out changes as the MC is focused on BENEFITS. -The world is the same as in the original, the only AU change is the MC's body, looks and name.

    46 Chs 9.9k sưu tầm

  • Reincarnated in 'Martial World' as the Protagonist (fanfic) original

    Reincarnated in 'Martial World' as the Protagonist (fanfic)

    Book&Literature WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM DARK OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI GENIUS ANTIHERO UNPRINCIPLED

    4.8

    Reincarnated as the Protagonist 'Lin Ming', a reader sets off on his own journey toward the peak of Martial Arts. ... The story takes place in the world of 'Martial World' written by Cocooned Cow, a classic of cultivation/Xianxia novels. I write in a way that anyone could understand the plot. The MC uses his novel knowledge and is assisted by a Magic Sphere cheat item that he finds together with the Magic Cube to be an even stronger Lin Ming. It could be considered 'Martial World Alternative', and is very suitable to read for people who don't know Martial World even though they wanted to pick it up or who can't remember the details very well. Warning: The Main Character starts in the same situation as the original, so there are a lot of similarities in the plot in the beginning, as he simply tries to do the same thing but better. Over time, the changes begin to accumulate, the butterfly effect grows, and there is more and more new content. Because Martial World is not popular, I sometimes include a considerable amount of canon paragraphs/content from the original, but I try to inform the readers about it if there’s a lot, limit it and I still edit it to fit the story, or I try to make things a bit more interesting. However, I'll have to say that the first 10 chapters might include a high amount of canon paragraphs, since I felt that cutting these out would be a waste and readers would make no sense of the story. Cheat: The MC's personal cheat item Magic Sphere is something that combines the abilities of the Purple Crystal Card, Divine Dream Space and Magic Cube. It allows the MC to enter an imaginary space where he can hunt monsters to acquire energy orbs, elemental orbs, soul force orbs and others; it's based on the cheat of the novel 'Pocket Hunting Dimension'. This allows him to progress much faster, master many kinds of Laws and also help his partners to become powerful. /// The current story is a rewrite of the previous version that had the MC be transmigrated at 15 years old instead of being reincarnated. The MC is now reincarnated to make the story telling deeeper. ///

    2 Chs 922 sưu tầm

  • Fate/Re:Zero - Heroic Spirit Integration System (fanfic) original

    Fate/Re:Zero - Heroic Spirit Integration System (fanfic)

    Anime & Comics SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM TRANSMIGRATION ANTIHERO KINGDOMBUILDING LEVELUP HIGHIQ EGOIST

    4.88

    Transmigrated into the world of Re:Zero with a Grail-gifted system that allows him to integrate the power and abilities of various Heroic Spirits into himself, Orion makes his path through the plot while aiming to become a supreme existence. He starts with being only able to bring out 10% of his first integrated Heroic Spirit's power, but his Integration Percentage raises as he progresses through the plot and he unlocks more of his Heroic Spirits' powers, as well as acquires new Class Cards. Starting with Saber Mordred Pendragon as his first Heroic Spirit, Orion gets accidently pulled into the Royal Election, eventually deciding to become a new king of Lugnica, if only to fulfill the Special Bonus Quest and unlock a Ruler Class. **** It is not an AU. The MC is intruding into the original world of Re:Zero. - The System allows the MC to gain the strength and abilities of many different Heroic Spirits he happens to summon, making their strength his and combining all of their skills. At the start he only has one Class unlocked, but he gains a new Class Card with each passed Arc (for a total of Seven Main Classes from the Arcs + extra Classes from Bonus Quests + additional future unlocks for double classes). -The Heroic Spirits that the MC summons would be chosen 'randomly', prioritizing ones that he's 'compatible with'; though it basically translated to ones he likes, would get along with well or are similar to him. The auxiliary volume contains spoilers in regards to which Heroic Spirits he summons for each of the Main Classes. - Subaru is also there, but the plot is quite changed as he has a rather stress-free life as a side-character and secondary protagonist. - The MC has the ability to grant Lesser Grails to a few other people in the world, giving them the power to receive the powers of a Heroic Spirit they happen to summon. - The story will eventually include a harem, but it is not harem focused and there won't be much progress in the 'harem' department in the early chapters. (BTW, MC's main love interests are: Rem, Echidna and Priscilla, but his relationship with Emilia will also be quite special, and it's also guaranteed that he'd be quite popular with the other heroines. I'm not sure about Crush at this point, and if Orion would prevent her from losing her memories.) ///Tags: Servant Integration System///

    8 Chs 2.2k sưu tầm

  • [DROPPED] everend Insanity fanfic - Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance original

    [DROPPED] everend Insanity fanfic - Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance

    Book&Literature ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM DARK OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN

    4.62

    Reverend Insanity reader transmigrates as Gu Yue Chi Yan shortly before the Awakening Ceremony. He soon shockingly finds out that it's a slightly different world than he knows from the novel - the grandson of Elder Gu Yue Chi Lian is not Chi Cheng with a C-grade aptitude, but it's someone called Chi Yan, having the Ten Extreme Aptitude - the Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance Physique! Shocked by this discovery, Chi Yan does his best to adapt to the new world, trying to survive and become a powerful existance. However, just how should he deal with Fang Yuan? ...... I reccomend people to at least read 14 chapters if they don't like the *direction* of the story. I guess I don't want to give spoilers.

    55 Chs 1.3k sưu tầm

  • [DROPPED] Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (fanfiction) original

    [DROPPED] Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (fanfiction)

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE DARK SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI ANTIHERO HIGHIQ EGOIST UNPRINCIPLED

    4.67

    INFO: The development of this novel did not quite work out as I wished to (as it is, it made Mordred look like an Emilia simp, and I don't like it too). I honestly wish I could delete/hide it for a future re-writing, but I keep it around in this form since it's still decent and some people might want to read it. Keeping the comments for reference would also be useful. ............ Transmigrated into the Re:Zero world as Mordred Pendragon (male) from the Fate series. With strength of a Heroic Spirit and Return by Death, Mordred aims to become one of the most powerful existances and the next King of Lugnica. As Mordred soon finds out, he was not the only transmigrator, because Natsuki Subaru is also there for some reason. However, even though the world is nearly identical to the anime, it seems like things aren't exactly as they seemed. **** This is an AU / consider it an AU in regards to the OC only. Notes: The MC is not Subaru's underling, he's the MC, so don't read and whine that Subaru doesn't have powers or isn't the center of attention. (The MC also steals opportunities from Subaru.) Note: The MC is more of an antihero or a hero out of convenience if it isn't too much trouble. He isn't an evil villain, but he's definitely a quite greedy, pragmatic and a bit selfish person. For his own benefits and for his lover(s), he isn't afraid of killing or dirtying his hands (not that it might happen often, but that's just his attitude). He's honest with himself and true to his nature. The MC also has MANY personality traits of Mordred and is basically Mordred, so he isn't a typical Self Insert OC. He tends to act casually, bluntly and sometimes violently just like Mordred, but he's also able to scheme and behave himself if he feels like it.

    33 Chs 3.8k sưu tầm