BlooDBury

BlooDBury

male LV 2
2021-09-10 đã tham gia Global
Huy hiệu 4

Moments 133
BlooDBury
BlooDBury
17 days ago
Commented

I think that by the rules of the 100, he should be punished for endangering the people who were with him and potentially making the Grounders enemies to the rest of the 100. Although if there is no punishment he could do something that makes him die faster and make Raven get him out of her head, I prefer this option xd.

BlooDBury
BlooDBury
18 days ago
Commented

Very good doing this fanfic based on the other one, I really hope you continue, and as a fan of the Nasuverse I hope for several old people and heroes for your faction, if you can not rush so much for the canon and make the mc go after his patriate throughout history like miyamoto musashi, okita souji, Artoria or mordred, Jeanne d'Arc, etc. Keep going man

BlooDBury
BlooDBury
23 days ago
Commented

Now, I'm really looking forward to the rewrite with Jean. And if you can say Jean's maximum power level would be MCU or multiversal level? since she is very strong as a phoenix host and it looks a bit bad for an alpha like wolverine to be weaker than her, but good luck with the rewrite.

BlooDBury
BlooDBury
26 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, the beginning was really good. So he's in a world that's full of animes from other animes but with a focus on DxD and since he doesn't know anything about the work, apparently he'll have a system which is really good if he wants to fight future threats. Then he now has Grayfia and we see the whole plot of things like time which I think is stupid and I only see a good scenario, he went back in time because of Trihexa or ExE, or the future ended, and this present is now what matters like: "I'm going to send some things to the past to help with this or whatever". Anyway, it's just the first chapter with a lot of information, but I liked the chapter and how it started, which makes me want to keep reading to know better in future chapters.

Sách này đã bị xóa
BlooDBury
BlooDBury
BlooDBury
1 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, finaly a fanfic about that work and a slice of life type, keep doing and don't drop :3

img
Sách này đã bị xóa
BlooDBury
BlooDBury
1 months ago
Replied to AnimeDamon

Thanks for explaining what I had doubts about, I haven't actually read or watched DxD, my knowledge is from fanfic so I was totally wrong in the aspects but ok, my criticism and what would be for the future was more to see my doubts regarding the future so that you don't end up with the fanfic in the middle and etc, and it's totally ok about the things about rage powerup which makes sense since this is a new life and he doesn't know anything about the anime.

BlooDBury
BlooDBury
1 months ago
Commented

If there is no X-Man then will Storm and Jean still have their powers? I hope so, but the problem is about Jean and a multiverse level phoenix inside her, I don't know how far it would go until this fanfic, if it goes until Thanos then don't involve the phoenix and if you go further, for example, Dormammu, Galactus and the Celestias, which I think would be too much, a good story until the end of Thanos would be better even because of the MC's powers depending on how much he could strengthen, Very good story continues like this.

BlooDBury
BlooDBury
1 months ago
Commented

The problem with the MC's power in the future is the events compared to the canon, where Issei always faces enemies much stronger than him and wins. Ex: Kokabiel and Loki, both have thousands of years of experience and an ultimate class with 10 wings and the other is a God on par with Odin, I think in the canon he is older than Thor. The power levels don't explain much in the canon, but it also never explained how exactly Issei's boost works, which made the community not complain so much about him beating the villains. But you have an MC who can't get stronger until I think 2 years after the beginning of the plot, assuming that Rias and Sona are 16 years old. So how would he be useful assuming he doesn't have an extra power, I don't see him having a high class demonic power beating against ultimate and gods which in my opinion high class to ultimate class has a qualitative increase, but that's just the beginning, and as you're going to change the way the power levels are already shown in the auxiliary chapter, I hope that in the future he doesn't win the fights with the power of love/anger/friendship/plot armor.

BlooDBury
BlooDBury
1 months ago
Commented

I wanted to make some constructive criticism regarding the future of the plot. We all know that almost every fight is about the Fairy Tail characters always getting hurt or crying and all that drama, and then you have an overpowered MC who can help them quickly and easily. Like, I know they need to grow and get stronger through difficult fights, but it kind of leaves a bad taste when their friends or loved ones are giving it their all and trying not to die or whatever, and suppose MC doesn't do anything because of the luck and plot armor that Fairy Tail has. But I hate moments when there's an overpowered MC and MC who takes everything too easy and only when his friends are in danger of death or very injured that MC would go into rage mode and end everything. Since it's a slice of life with overpowered MC, moments like that are not good at all, I hope for cool fights without drama and to end it when necessary, but apart from all that, you're doing great, keep it up :D

Sách này đã bị xóa