Ieva_Kleinberga

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I would not put my name as editor of this novel. The editing job has been done poorly

Im getting quite annoyed that every new chapter starts with text from previous one. We pay for word count in chaper here... Besides the announcement on piracy at the end of each chapter... WTH?!

Looking forward to another chapter, but it's not too good to make this one as separate chapter to pay for ... Wataf (???!!!)

The story is great, though language, mistyping and spelling mistakes annoy and sometimes pulls out of story line. ..

I agree few chapters ago Neptune left saying DO NOT LET HER SLEEP

Way to improve language. Past and present tenses mixed all up and lots of other language mistakes. Hard to follow. Feels like Google translate, but WELL DONE! for trying and doing!