Bhavya_Grover_4824

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2021-09-08 đã tham gia Global
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Bhavya_Grover_4824
15 days ago
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The story is genuinely engaging, and I really enjoyed it! But I feel like the characters’ interactions and speech are a bit too formal, which takes away some of the romance and chemistry. If their conversations felt more natural and emotionally charged, the love story would shine even brighter. A little tweak here and there, and this could be a truly unforgettable romance!

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