The story is genuinely engaging, and I really enjoyed it! But I feel like the characters’ interactions and speech are a bit too formal, which takes away some of the romance and chemistry. If their conversations felt more natural and emotionally charged, the love story would shine even brighter. A little tweak here and there, and this could be a truly unforgettable romance!
The story is genuinely engaging, and I really enjoyed it! But I feel like the characters’ interactions and speech are a bit too formal, which takes away some of the romance and chemistry. If their conversations felt more natural and emotionally charged, the love story would shine even brighter. A little tweak here and there, and this could be a truly unforgettable romance!
Breaking Free, Loving Again -The Flash Marriage with Mr. CEO
Urban · Scarlet_Shine