I wonder who Anko student of Orachimaru could be thinking that she froze while looking at you, who have pale skin, yellow eyes, and dark hair. I wonder who it could be. But what I can say is that even if you look like ''him'', you don't have his intelligence.
Not ears? It looks like the author does read comments.
Stepping forward, Goro reached down, cutting off Kimimaro's big toe and placing it in his pocket. 'His powers will finally be mine.'
Anime & Comics · DrWright
I kind of expected for him to corrupt the sage chakra to make his own unholy energy since he does not care about the world and wants to retun. It would make sense since if you say you can return to your world if you kill every living thing in the world, he will do it without a second thought.
Same; it is a plot hole at this point. Maybe he will find out because of it, which is dumb, like just take a finger or skin, even teeth, just don't do the same thing you did to the Hokages corpse.
Once they were gone, Goro turned his attention to Jirobo, who was still unconscious on the ground. Walking over, Goro took his kunai out of his pouch and plunged it into Jirobo's neck, ensuring the kill. He then cut off Jirobo's ear, storing it in his pocket for later.
Anime & Comics · DrWright
Thank you for the chapter.
I can't wait; just don't let it take 50-100 chapters. Since the chapters are small, I am worried it will take too long even with the fast-updated schedule.
I know a lot of people wanted Jack to blow up in rage but that's not really logical considering he has max intelligence and knows that it would be useless. Instead, I'm going the cold revenge route, so it will take a bit longer but I'll make the payoff great.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
It's good and all, but don't forget he is still a teenager, so even if he goes with logical action, his emotions do not disappear, so when he starts his revenge, it will be amazing to see him cackle like Joker and open the flood gates for his emotions and go mad for a few chapters since he is suppressing them. It should be quite an explosive reveal. I have seen many authors make MC have revenge while acting like a robot, but then why bother with revenge if you are not going to feel anything about it?
I know a lot of people wanted Jack to blow up in rage but that's not really logical considering he has max intelligence and knows that it would be useless. Instead, I'm going the cold revenge route, so it will take a bit longer but I'll make the payoff great.
Movies · WhiteAuthor
Good, its better than just being discovered because of the plot, but now it is tied to the story since his god is a troll sometimes and dungeon does hate him. Its not just happened because of the plot, i mean, even if its that, at least it has a logical explanation unlike other stories that just make their Oc Stumble every damn character by ''chance'' without logic, so good job author.
Her tone was sharp, but I raised my arms in surrender as I revealed myself. It was too late to back right now, that squirrel must've been Azathoth's deed or the dungeon itself despises me.
Anime & Comics · Rtanj
After all of that, you need to understand nature talk. It would be so funny and epic if he cheated his way. ORRR corrupts the sage chakra to make his own unholy energy since if there is a positive (nature chakra), there should be a negative one, right? It would be a nice shatter their world view. haha
"Can't win them all, I guess."
SASUKE: The Fanfiction
Anime & Comics · Raven_Aelwood