I adored your story, you have a different approach and I think that is why I keep reading it. You have a great storyline and in my opinion, you must pay attention a little more to the details, but as far I can tell this is an amazing novel, can't wait to see how it's ending.
I think it is a great story and you are making it so much better. I was captivated at the moment when I read the synopsis, an interesting idea. Keep writing! You are an amazing author, love your ideas and how you put them together.
Amazing story!!! I love it and I was attracted to read more since the first chapter. You’ve done an amazing job by now. I loved how you switched the words and make them more interesting for the readers and I liked the flashbacks, an interesting idea to add them. Keep it going!❤️
Yes, sorry, I didn't check the text well before posting🤦🏻♀️
War Among Nations
Fantasy · Crystal03_