This is sweet, and I’m really glad that he’s got a buddy to tell him to go for it, that the difficulty is worth it, and that there’s a place for them and their potential children.
It’s improving! Don’t lose heart. English is funky. Even when things get a little confusing, your overall plot is still there.
Great chapter!
That’s what I’m wondering, too!
Thiiiiis!
Who?
Ugh. I hate that you’re right.
Poor Vella. That’s awful!
I suspect this is Ian in disguise.
The Demon’s Bride
Fantasy · mata0eve